The Tarnished Potter Chapter 15 (No More Hiding)
Added 2025-11-07 23:38:07 +0000 UTCClick the LINK Below to Read the Chapter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xuhtk_psDmufgHF27YTYVEI4DFljSU1siO4qEyssaxo/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Uhh… seems like you’ve repeated yourself in the middle of this chapter. We have Harry and co discovering the castle twice. We go from them being on the border of the bridge to them back on the approach to the castle. The fighting was awesome! What’s the goal with the runes Harry gathers? Will he finally be able to use them at a site of grace? Will we see Melina soon again? Looking forward to that and ESPECIALLY towards the badass fight Harry’s going to have with the Misbegotten! So hyped for that.
TheWateringWizard
2025-11-12 17:30:45 +0000 UTCJust me or was there a bit of like a repost or maybe a retry? Like you have one paragraph talk about them needing to cross the bridge then jumped back a bit and had the whole encounter again but phrased slightly different? I could be wrong.
Josh Robbins
2025-11-08 00:50:06 +0000 UTCEsta genial si puedes subir mas de un cap te lo estaria muy agredecida gracias por el cap
alba perez
2025-11-08 00:28:19 +0000 UTC
