The Dark Side of Magic Chapter 1 (Never Alone)
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This is Force Ghost Anakin. Vader wouldn’t have cared to help Harry, or seeing that he’s stuck inside Harry, he would have tried to corrupt him. I have planned Harry’s character arc, and even Anakin will be helped by Harry in the future, but let’s not do spoilers for now.
Drinor
2024-09-02 04:44:40 +0000 UTCThe only way this makes sense is if it's Force Ghost Anakin. Otherwise he's literally talking to Harry while he's Darth Vader. Vader wouldn't give 2 shits about Harry. Jedi Anakin would and Force Ghost Anakin probably would. But Force Ghost Anakin is the only way this makes sense if the Asoka stuff is in the past and already happened, which it has to be because Akakin is sad about it, which would only happen if he had already been Vader and Luke redeemed him. So if this is FG Anakin, I can't see him teaching Harry only about the Dark side. It goes against every theme of his story. A mix between the 2, Light and Dark, I could see, but not just Dark. Using only the Dark basically makes Luke's entire story arc pointless and rendering Anakin becoming a Force Ghost Impossible, as it was his redemption that made that entire thing possible. Seems like a pretty interesting story, so far. Hopefully this isn't just some edgelord dark Slytherin cringe Harry tho. That's definitely not my thing. It's be done a millions times, and never well lol
Hakai
2024-09-01 23:07:41 +0000 UTCHarry will go through a lot of changes, especially as he gets stronger with the force. The Dark Side will be quite enticing for him. Harry/Fleur is one of my favorite pairings.
Drinor
2024-08-08 12:58:55 +0000 UTCI will publish another poll this month, and if Avatar of Westeros gets the most votes, I will write it's first chapter. Hermione is a good one.
Drinor
2024-08-08 12:57:07 +0000 UTCVery interesting beginning ! I hope Harry uses both the Light and Dark Side of the Force. For the pairings, I hope Daphne and Fleur are in it. Luna could a good third or Susan Bones.
TheWateringWizard
2024-08-08 09:35:48 +0000 UTCVery good ideas !
TheWateringWizard
2024-08-08 09:34:38 +0000 UTCAs much as I love this story, I hope one day you can do the other stories you put on the poll, specifically avatar in westeros...... Hermione needs to be in the pairing
Isaiah Warner
2024-08-08 05:03:59 +0000 UTCThat’s a Good Idea
Drinor
2024-08-06 12:47:41 +0000 UTCHave to vote Hermione because she seems like a decent Padme parallel
Jack Joslin
2024-08-06 10:20:36 +0000 UTCI will publish a poll for the pairing and Harry’s future with the Force. That’s Spoilers, but let’s say Harry will use The Dark Side of the Force in the future.
Drinor
2024-08-06 09:19:36 +0000 UTCThis is very interesting, and I have only one question, will Harry be progressing towards Sith story, or will he be a Gray Jedi Sorcerer (Name pending if your interested) and my suggestion will be Daphne, Fleur, and Susan Bones. Susan because she doesn’t get a lot of love, plus I love the idea that she can relate to him, she’s a redhead (or strawberry blonde in some fics.) and I have a weakness for Hufflepuff girls. Let me know what you think.
Gizmodragon90
2024-08-06 00:24:57 +0000 UTCGood Suggestions. I love Harry/Fleur stories.
Drinor
2024-08-05 16:44:31 +0000 UTCI like Daphne, Fleur, Tonks
Ryan
2024-08-05 16:41:57 +0000 UTCI really don’t think I will add Star Wars girls into the story.
Drinor
2024-08-05 05:23:39 +0000 UTCFully agree with Daphne and Luna but I would suggest Padma as the third. Unless the goal is to cover as many houses as possible.
Ironcoil
2024-08-05 03:47:36 +0000 UTCLet's not forget that his beautiful Harry Potter girls for him but if his a crossover with Star Wars I would see him soon with 1 or 2 daughter of this universe like Leia or... Rey or the 2
yan boul
2024-08-05 01:53:50 +0000 UTCAlways vote Tonks lol
Josh Robbins
2024-08-04 16:25:44 +0000 UTCI will publish a poll soon.
Drinor
2024-08-04 14:56:19 +0000 UTCJust no Hermione and I'm happy
Ryan
2024-08-04 14:53:42 +0000 UTCWhich version of Anakin is this will be revealed more later. As for pairing. I think I will publish a poll. Luna is a good candidate.
Drinor
2024-08-04 08:32:02 +0000 UTCIt will take a while for Anakin to Reveal more of his past to Harry. I think I will publish a poll about Harry's future women soon.
Drinor
2024-08-04 08:27:20 +0000 UTCThat’s spoilers, but the Force is not the only thing Anakin will teach Harry.
Drinor
2024-08-04 08:24:30 +0000 UTCInteresting start. I wonder if this is a force ghost of the redeemed Anakin from the end of Return of the Jedi. He would have more knowledge on the dark side and how it is a trap. As for partners. This seems to be a more studious Harry so if he goes into Ravenclaw then he could get involved with Sue Li (maybe have her family have some martial arts traditions or Chinese mysticism that could interact with the force), Padma Patil (something similar to Sue Li but from Indian traditions) and Luna Lovegood (you could go with her in many strange directions from precognition training to having some fey heritage. Maybe give her a connection to Master Fay). Honestly a single pairing of Harry trained by Anakin and Luna trained by Master Fay (either a force ghost that bonded with her during her mothers accident and helped her save her mother or from a holocron that Luna found) would make an interesting dynamic. Especially with how both Anakin and Fay have completely opposite approaches to solving problems.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2024-08-04 03:07:25 +0000 UTCHmmm… Great start. Anakin as his master and Harry reminds him of Ashoka. So, I think this is the time period when Padme will become pregnant, as Anakin is a general from the war, then I think that he will teach Harry how to command and lead, and if that is the case, then Harry will be a leader. As he should have a woman from each house, so I think Daphne, Hermoine, Susan, and Luna. Daphne for her political skills, Hermy for her intellect, Susan for her loyalty, and Luna for her spiritual powers.
Witherdale
2024-08-04 02:22:08 +0000 UTCIs it a complete mix of the words or are just picking small pieces to piece together, and is harry Going to get some b1 battle droids??
Spooky
2024-08-03 22:04:18 +0000 UTCI’m not sure yet who Harry’s partners will be. Glad you like the chapter.
Drinor
2024-08-03 19:13:47 +0000 UTCGlad you like it
Drinor
2024-08-03 19:11:26 +0000 UTCDefinitely an interesting start, can't wait to see what else you come up with for this story. I'd say for the potential romance partners, why not try and see if some of the lesser used characters could work, just as something different. Other than that just looking forward to future chapters
Omecrion
2024-08-03 18:46:24 +0000 UTCTftc good job
travis btmb
2024-08-03 18:45:14 +0000 UTCThank You for the Suggestion. Glad you like it.
Drinor
2024-08-03 18:40:21 +0000 UTCPretty interesting start. Daphne, Susan and Luna; you need a devil on one shoulder, an angel on the other and Luna you never really know what she’ll do. It’d be an interesting grouping for a Harry Potter/Star Wars fic
Jonathan Edwards
2024-08-03 18:18:35 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it.
Drinor
2024-08-03 17:33:20 +0000 UTCIt will be quite a Trip
Drinor
2024-08-03 17:33:12 +0000 UTCGlad you like it.
Drinor
2024-08-03 17:33:02 +0000 UTCI’m loving this so far. Can’t wait to see more! :)
NotableRonin
2024-08-03 17:31:23 +0000 UTCThis should be a fun trip.
Oopsibwokeit
2024-08-03 15:34:35 +0000 UTCSolid start, I'm excited to see where this one is headed.
Erinnyes
2024-08-03 14:59:07 +0000 UTC
