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A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 14 (New Friends, and A Troll)

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Kinda reminds me of enuncia from WH40K.

cjmd3419

I’m glad you like it. It will be updated soon.

Drinor

Never really been a fan of Harry potter fanfics but I start reading this one a few days ago and I really like this one. Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to the next chapters when they are released

Nathaniel Palo

Hermione, is honestly the best to find out first. She breaks so many rules despite knowing them so well lol. And Itisa likes her, so that’s the best sign

Platyperry

I am a big fan of The Witcher 3: The Wild Hunt. You have a good idea; Harry might use something from that game. Hermione will have a barrage of questions for Harry. Voldemort and Quirrel won’t like what will happen to them.

Drinor

Glad you like it

Drinor

I’m happy to hear that.

Drinor

Glad you like it

Drinor

Tftc good job

travis btmb

Since Harry is a prodigious genius and can use spells with his hands, what do you think of him creating 5 spells? They come from The Witcher. Aard - Telekinetic wave that pushes, stuns and even knocks down, depending on the intensity and size of the target. Igni - Sets objects and opponents on fire; Yrden - Trap that immobilizes enemies; Quen - Protects against physical damage; Axii - Causes mental confusion and in certain cases, even mind control; You can check out The Witcher spells in The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt game, to get an idea of how they are used. Excellent chapter. So finally Hermione will find out the truth about Itisa I'm very much looking forward to seeing Harry destroy Voldemort and Quirell in the first year. I just hope he doesn't go unconscious after winning, all the stories I've read, he faints after the fight, but Harry is a badass here and I love that.

João Victor Gomes Alves

I just caught up and am enjoying this a lot!

Oopsibwokeit

Great chapter. Thank you!

Romavictrix

Oh Garry that is cool kid Harry

I am lord dems

I just fixed it, and I can’t believe I didn’t notice it. Thank You for telling me.

Drinor

"Harry chatted more with the only three Slytherin Students who seemed to want to talk with him, but soon, Daphne started talking with Tracey and Pansy. Sebastian, with his sister, walked out of the Main Hall with Headmaster Snape to brew a special potion." That is the part of this chapter that you made the mistake. Don't remember where in previous chapters the mistake was made, but I do remember seeing it.

Draco Pendragon

Harry

yan boul

Garry?! Well, Garry will obliterate Quirrell soon.

Drinor

So how long till Garry destroys quirell

I am lord dems

I’m glad you like it. Itisa showed the Troll, who’s boss, and Harry revealed more of his power.

Drinor

Where is that mistake? I just checked this chapter, and I don’t see it.

Drinor

Tank you for this i love the scene between Harry and Hermione, interesting talk with Dumbledore, and i almost thought that Isita would tear the troll appart, but now Harry knew who is réal enemy is .

MAEGHT Maxime

Another great chapter but I think I saw it in past chapters too so why do you keep saying 'Headmaster' Snape? Keep up the great work can't wait to see what happens.

Joshua Naugle


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