A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 13 (First Week, Talisman, and Snakes)
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I’m glad you like the story. Harry will definitely change things for the better.
Drinor
2024-07-18 20:20:53 +0000 UTCI didn't know what to think about a slytherin Harry but it's growing on me. I think he could make a change for the better there.
GhostnKC
2024-07-18 19:52:06 +0000 UTCThank you for pointing it out.
Drinor
2024-07-18 11:12:58 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear it. I enjoy writing this story, and I’m sure people will like what I have planned.
Drinor
2024-07-18 10:46:59 +0000 UTCI think him in slytherin is a good choice I like to see how he is behaving and the fact that he is a genius. I think slytherin should be where he stays because he still has friends elsewhere and as you've said slowly he will change slytherin anyway so no point in jumping elsewhere already. Dont let any negative comments get you down this is an amazing story and my only complaint is that there isnt faster releases lol
Gregory Sullivan
2024-07-18 09:40:38 +0000 UTCThanks for pointing out. English is my second language, so I often make mistakes.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:14:39 +0000 UTCThat’s definitely what will happen. While some Slytherin students will get jealous of Harry, many will realize that Harry is more of a Slytherin than them, and that will make them change their minds.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:13:45 +0000 UTCI have already planned the story with him being in Slytherin, and I believe people will like what I have planned.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:12:08 +0000 UTCI'm glad you like it. Dumbledore will try to fix the sinking ship that is ‘Harry. I want you to get along with Snape,’ but he will also give him something to make more Talismans.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:11:17 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. While they are hostile right now. Slytherins will slowly get used to Harry.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:09:15 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. Slytherins will slowly see that Harry is in the right, and they are doing nothing but bullying someone and not actually getting better. Daphne will be the first to try to become Harry’s friend.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:08:19 +0000 UTCI understand what you mean, but as Harry told Itisa in this chapter. She will know not to attack again unless Harry is in real danger. This version of Snape is from the Books. When it comes to the other Slytherins, they will slowly get used to Harry.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:04:41 +0000 UTCGlad you like it
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:01:20 +0000 UTCBecause his ambition is a tiny bit bigger than his other qualities. Draco won’t like what’s coming to him.
Drinor
2024-07-18 06:01:04 +0000 UTCI’m pretty sure he can thrive just fine in Slytherin.
Drinor
2024-07-18 05:59:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. He should stay in Slytherin, there was a poll before and Slytherin won "You are probably right because I'm all hearing right now is shit. -- because all I'm hearing right now is shit.
Setsuna
2024-07-18 05:32:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, I think that harry in slytherin will necessitate character growth on him and allow him to change the house for the better from within.
DJOK DJOK
2024-07-18 00:45:17 +0000 UTCI like him seeing him in slytherin. I feel like it's too early for people to be yelling for change, as we don't know what the plan is anyway. I'm honestly interested in seeing how he moves forward being where he is, and how he makes the best of his circumstances.
Shura
2024-07-17 23:38:21 +0000 UTCFor those who read this, get over yourselves... there was a poll as to what house Harry would be in and it was Slytherin. So that's where he is meant to be in this story unless Drinor decided otherwise, but he accepted the results and placed Harry into the Snake House. If you don't like this, you should have voted when the poll was up. Anyway, I'm loving the story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait to see what Dumbledore has to say to Harry, but I can guess it has to do with Snape and how he has to get along with the teacher.
Liam Lane
2024-07-17 23:27:47 +0000 UTCI like this version of him in Slytherin. I feel like this is how it really would have been handled by the populace of the house rather than some other stories.
Pup Washington
2024-07-17 22:44:42 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. I enjoyed watching Harry's first lessons. He's a prodigious genius (I love that you made him a genius). Although Slytherin doesn't like him, leave him in Slytherin, Harry is too smart and ambitious in this fic to go to another house. I can't wait to see Harry excel more and more at school. Slytherin, despite hating him, will not be able to deny that the genie is from their house and so they will either be jealous, or they will take advantage of it. Harry's a badass and I love it.
João Victor Gomes Alves
2024-07-17 22:27:52 +0000 UTCOkay… mixed feelings. While I like the idea of Harry in Slytherin, there’s many interesting things that can be done with it, I feel like it won’t be possible for Harry and Snape to be this antagonistic towards each other. Their first meeting in canon was already bad enough but in this story ? Plus Itisa already attacking a student… how can Harry last till 4th year if the slightest provocation from Draco triggers him. He was supposed to remain discreet with her. I still don’t see how a Nundu will be accepted when he’s 14 but at this rate, they won’t reach that age. It’s not a first in this story but the smart, snarky, arrogant Harry triggering Snape and coming out the better person because Snape drew his wand on him ? Can this really go on for 4 years ? 5? Not sure what to think
TheWateringWizard
2024-07-17 22:01:53 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, i hope to read the next soon
Mauricio Sanchez
2024-07-17 21:23:12 +0000 UTCI do like how Harry mingles with the other houses and there's no real tribalism for him.
Tamsus Karalius
2024-07-17 21:11:54 +0000 UTCNo clue why you’d put him in Slytherin - but I hope he sneakily constantly beats the shot out of Draco
Ryan
2024-07-17 21:05:46 +0000 UTCget him out of Slytherin and put him somewhere where he can thrive
terrance smith
2024-07-17 21:01:11 +0000 UTC"Watch your words, Potter. Here you are defenseless." Marco revealed his ugly head. With the two statues following behind him, the two cracked their knuckles quite loudly. Itisa growled from where she was; her eyes focused on Draco and his goons." I'm assuming you meant Draco and not Marco? I think there's a few other times this happens
Tamsus Karalius
2024-07-17 21:00:42 +0000 UTCDamn, was hoping he didn't end in Slytherin 😔
Tamsus Karalius
2024-07-17 20:51:51 +0000 UTC
