A Hungry Dragon Chapter 6 (Return to Winterfell)
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There is also the fact that Lord Flint probably has no respect for her at all, not only because she is an Southern Andal who worships the seven, but because Lyarra probably told him how she treated Jon while in Winterfell.
Gabe Sarti
2024-12-01 20:24:16 +0000 UTCLove this story
Michael Ellingsworth
2024-09-04 03:22:40 +0000 UTCDamn the Trout started quite quickly to fill Sansa’s head with non-sense… but hopefully the Greyjoy Rebellion isn’t far away and that’ll leave Lyarra in Winterfell to correct all the Seven Star garbage she’s been taught. Badass to see Jon this observant and ready for action
TheWateringWizard
2024-07-29 15:31:53 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it.
Drinor
2024-07-27 03:33:17 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved the chapter. This story has became my favorite you’ve written and I love all of your ASOIAF/GOT works. Can’t wait for the next updates.
Nova
2024-07-27 00:55:14 +0000 UTCI mean I kind of get that and maybe for some "bastards" this could be an issue. But if she just got to know him she would know it's not and I don't think the other lord would change his mind just because she wants him to
Eva Cole
2024-07-26 14:21:23 +0000 UTCLyarra will be there to help Sansa. Catelyn is desperately trying to find a way to prevent Jon from becoming a Lord with an army that he can use against her children.
Drinor
2024-07-23 15:28:22 +0000 UTCHopefully Sansa is at least given the chance to see why her mother is wrong here. And honestly I don't think Catlyn understands that Ned won't try and overstep and she'll never convince lord Flint when he's already seen Jon and gotten to know him
Eva Cole
2024-07-23 14:57:17 +0000 UTCGotcha. Gonna be great to see what she does
Longclaw16
2024-07-12 01:47:46 +0000 UTCForget the Quiet Wolf, it's the Mother Wolf who truly runs the pack.
John M Pogue
2024-07-11 03:42:21 +0000 UTCNed will be too busy with the Rebellion. Thankfully, Lyarra will be there to correct a few things.
Drinor
2024-07-10 06:35:39 +0000 UTCNed really needs to have a talk with Sansa before she gets any more garbage in her head.
Longclaw16
2024-07-10 02:40:12 +0000 UTCLyarra won’t tell anyone; it will be revealed later that Jon told her not to say anything about what happened to Bella, and right now, Jon is not really in the mood to open up about what happened.
Drinor
2024-07-07 11:17:29 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. This story is planned, so I believe you will like the end results.
Drinor
2024-07-07 11:15:55 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that. This Jon will slowly become quite menacing, especially after a particular event happens later in the story.
Drinor
2024-07-07 11:14:44 +0000 UTCI can see Lyarra being there for Arya if she has self-esteem issues like she did in canon and putting those who bully her in their place
John M Pogue
2024-07-07 03:56:15 +0000 UTCA great chapter, though I wonder if Lyarra will tell the others, specifically Ned and Robb, or even Sansa, why exactly Jon is acting the way he is, especially given Robb had to make a comment about Consequences, and the look Jon had in his eyes, I think we can take a guess at what he was thinking of, though whether or not Lyarra will clarify, have to wait and see for that, especially if Jon doesn't want them knowing about Bella... and what he did to her killer.
Lost_Monarch
2024-07-07 03:40:42 +0000 UTCSo far this story is great and I hope it continues at the high lv your are usually at
Michael Marquardt
2024-07-07 03:05:21 +0000 UTCI can see lyarra as the discipliner of the family, especially since Ned didn’t do anything to punish Sansa over her treatment of Jon.
Gabe Sarti
2024-07-07 03:01:44 +0000 UTCI am also looking forward to his ad Rhae's next interaction.
John M Pogue
2024-07-07 00:57:13 +0000 UTCI hope It will be outstanding
Dietro981
2024-07-06 21:10:24 +0000 UTCThis was such a great chapter. I like seeing a darker side to Jon. The side that gets business done. Nothing wrong with a kind-hearted innocent and naive character but one that doesn’t take crap but still is kind to those around him is so much more captivating. I hope you update this story more. It’s slowly becoming one of my favorites.
Abdoulaye Sarr
2024-07-06 20:31:06 +0000 UTCJon is still too young to fight grown-ups, but what he will do is come up with clever plans against the Iron Borns.
Drinor
2024-07-06 20:27:28 +0000 UTCIn this story, Daemon will be a beast in more ways than one. I have already imagined Jon’s first meeting with Littlefinger, and it will be pretty entertaining.
Drinor
2024-07-06 20:26:30 +0000 UTCLyarra will never allow Sansa to continue to be like that. Jon is very observant and smart in this story. Ironborns won’t like what Ned will do to them, especially when the Rebellion fully starts.
Drinor
2024-07-06 20:25:10 +0000 UTCWill Jon be taking part in the greyjoy rebellion
thunderforth rc
2024-07-06 20:13:26 +0000 UTCWow bro I just love the way you’re building Daemons character it is perfection
thunderforth rc
2024-07-06 20:06:23 +0000 UTCDamn, look's like Catalyn already started to fill Sansa's head with nonsense, hopefully almost being kidnapped and Grandman Lyarra can knock some sense into her. Also, I like how observent Jon is with his surroundings. Beware Greyjoy for you have just awoke a sleeping Wolf, now Ned will be more invested in teaching the Ironborn an important lesson, don't mess with a Wolfs Pups.
John M Pogue
2024-07-06 19:08:37 +0000 UTC
