A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 10 (A Letter from Hogwarts)
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I just started reading this story today and it's awesome. Just a quick note. There is someone reposting this story on webnovel.com the author name is "ELLOMYGELLO" and the story name is "Place holder s" the repost is on chapter 325. It looks like they are just reposting a crap ton of other people's works
Clouffie
2024-12-23 04:00:21 +0000 UTCFascinating chapter. Based on what we've seen so far, I'd give even odds as whether Harry ends up in Cavenclaw or Gryffindor. I tan't see this Harry in Hufflepuff and I don't think he'd want Slytherin, though Snape's apoplexy if he was sorted there might be worth it.
Cateagle
2024-09-16 03:24:41 +0000 UTCGosh darn it i started tearing up when they started singing happy birthday. why am i so weak?
Grabbott
2024-07-18 02:29:30 +0000 UTCHarry likes the thought of flying with a broomstick, but he thinks that Quidditch is dangerous. I see what you mean. I think is just better to have him mention it every now and then. What do you think about Chapter 11 of this story? I’m happy you like the Chapter.
Drinor
2024-06-12 13:21:46 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter, I’m really intrigued about how will Harry keep Itisa when everyone ends up learning about her. There’s just one thing that annoys me in this chapter, how Harry reacts when talking about Quidditch. His thoughts process doesn’t feel like Harry AT ALL. I’m sorry but any muggle kid learning about flying broomsticks and a game that uses them would be dying to try it out. It’s also completely at odds to how canon Harry reacted to Quidditch. Your Harry here feels more like a 60 year old man. If you don’t want to write Quidditch or quidditch training, that’s fine. You can skip over it and just mention it in passing. I just feel like Quidditch is such a part of Harry’s character… And while you write your Harry the way you like, you often write him too mature or “old” for someone his age. But that’s my opinion and the one gripe I have with the story.
TheWateringWizard
2024-06-12 12:18:37 +0000 UTCHe has progressed, but still not enough to be able to talk with Itisa.
Drinor
2024-06-04 19:22:00 +0000 UTCI'd like to imagine he'd progressed enough to understand Itisa
Tamsus Karalius
2024-06-03 11:44:32 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. Harry will become a wild card, and a beast when it comes to Power.
Drinor
2024-06-01 18:54:51 +0000 UTCGreat work there mate, I love how this story is going and I can't wait to see where you go with this. I like the idea of this story and would like to see what kind of person Harry'll become... keep up the great work and hope to see more chapters soon.
Liam Lane
2024-06-01 18:51:57 +0000 UTCGlad you like it.
Drinor
2024-06-01 07:13:00 +0000 UTCI’m more than happy to write more Chapters
Drinor
2024-06-01 07:12:52 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter.
Bruce Parker
2024-06-01 04:59:03 +0000 UTCThanks so much for the chapter, please keep releasing as fast as possible I love your writing and It kills me to wait for each release
Gregory Sullivan
2024-06-01 04:48:53 +0000 UTC
