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A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 4 (Harry Has a Nundu?!)

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Small. Include luna

madmax176

Small daphné fleur and cho

Arthur Laval

I'd say a big one on the smaller side, so 4 girls.

Tamsus Karalius

Friend, I only know of one case in which a harem worked wonderfully, and although I don't like the subject, If you think you can make one without spoiling the story, then you are welcome, although small would be much better.

Kaleth_05

Big: Hermione, Daphne, Padma, Fleur, Nymphadora, and Cho

Delta105

Personally, I’d say small Harem is nicer. I’d say Daphne, Luna and Fleur.

SSs34TheElf

They won't react well if they try and take her away again. He'll never want to be their hero

Eva Cole

Good Suggestions.

Drinor

Small, Hermione Granger, Daphne Greengrass, Padma Patil

Ant Franklin

Big harem : Fleur, Daphne, Nymphadora, Parvati Patil, Padma Patil, Susan

maxime bégin

Harém de 3: Hermione Granger, Susam Bones, Daphne greengrass, mais garotas fica difícil de aguentar kkkkkk

Fernando Russi Oliveira

Small Harem makes more sense to me. If I had to pick who though, I'd go with my favorites: Hermione, Daphne and Fleur.

Ernest Rivers

Small Harem.

J T

Small Harem: Luna, Daphne, & Susan.

Draco Pendragon

Small harem. Why does Ted have a wand? Isn’t he a muggle ? Edit: never mind no, he’s muggleborn my bad

TheWateringWizard

Small harem to focus on plot pls

Platyperry

Big

TheRavenbrand

Big harem

Andrew

Big harem

Michael Marquardt

Small harem

Harpy81

good chapter and big harem

yan boul

I never doubted that lol. I'm just hoping they don't over react like Ted.

Palerider6660

Re Harem: Luna definitely fits in this story as either a best friend or partner for Harry - I can see her immediately going up to Itisa and them forming a bond too. Like Daphne as well with Slytherin being his house, they can become close easier in this story. I don’t think Hermione fits in this story as a partner - without the sorting they aren’t going to be able to realistically develop the same bond they had in Force of Magic - the romantic pairings should feel somewhat realistic - like Tonks and Hermione in FoM feel perfectly formed in how they have come together so far. Daphne and Luna 100% feel like they could be similar. An interesting OC idea could be a grandaughter of Newt Scamander that he meets soon - if Dumbledore does get involved he would certainly call Newt in to see about the Bond between Harry and Itisa. Newt had a Nundu in his suitcase in the first movie that he could approach so that might work? Just a couple thoughts Thanks for the update, can’t wait to see what’s next

Robert

Attacking a walking Nuke seems counter intuitive especially when it was in a small feline form - that should have at least signified there wasn’t an immediate threat - guess it’s hard to think fast rationally in that type of situation but it went as bad as it possibly could have without Itisa killing Ted or Nym. Hope this doesn’t drag out since it’s only once a month updated 😭

Robert

Dumbledore already appears to be the Greater Good type in this story, not listening to Ms. Figg about Harry’s mistreatment

Robert

I'd settle on 4 girls

AJ

Big harem

Howie60

Small harem

Wesley Sadzedwicz

Small, big ones suck, the members never get any real time, small with Luna, and either Daphne or Astoria or Lilith Moon

Frodran

Small harem 2-3 seems like enough I would say stick with Daphne and fleur maybe an oc to make 3

Legacy

big harem please. But no more then 6. After that it becomes too much.

Shannon Smacher

Hindsight is an asshole lol. Harry is probably going to have difficulty trusting any magical after this. Here's hoping Dumbledore and McGonagall stay more level headed.

Palerider6660

I’m glad you liked it. As far as Ted knew, Nundus cannot be tamed, and are walking Nukes. So he attacked.

Drinor

The next Chapter will have a more calm, but at the same time terrifying meeting with Itisa.

Drinor

A Nundu is very powerful; his daughter was there, so he did something without thinking first. And as Andromeda states later, as far as everyone knows, Nundus are not animals that can be tamed, so the thought that perhaps the Nundu wouldn’t attack didn’t even cross his mind. After arriving at his home, he realizes he should not have attacked Itisa.

Drinor

I say big harem. Also Ted was exceptionally fucking stupid here. He sees a Nundu which is a known wizard killer and is said to require 100 wizards to kill (of which about 40 will typically be killed in the battle) and he thinks lobbing spells in an otherwise calm situation is the correct choice. Kinda disappointing.

Palerider6660

Big harem

Juan Jimenez-tinajero

Small, big harems never have enough time to actually make it feel like he's in a genuine relationship with each of them, and Itisa already (correctly!) takes up a lot of screen time.

Erinnyes

Since Harry will be more powerful than in canon isita will even more useful during the war and for me a big harem

MAEGHT Maxime

Gotta love the knee jerk reactions, you’d think someone with a muggle background would assess the situation before attacking a creature that a dozen wizards could not stop. You’ve really shown how cerebral challenged wizards become after a Hogwarts education. Another amazing chapter and look forward to seeing how they get themselves out of this mess!

Ironcoil

Not how I thought you would introduce Ted to the nudu but good none the less thanks for the chapter

TheslayerofZ

Big harem Susan, Daphne, Luna, hermione, fluer, nym

Angel


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