A Hungry Dragon Chapter 1 (The Lady of Winterfell)
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I belive a small harem would be wise with a story like this, as for how it's going, fucking fantastic, this is how I wished the relationship between Jon and Rob was like. And how Lady trout was put in her place by someone that sees logic and reason over faith and belief.
Tk Oni
2024-12-08 10:24:14 +0000 UTCI just want to say that I am personally tired of seeing writers constantly think or write that ned sent Jon to the wall. Jon chose the wall because of the old stories and legends that all children in the north are told. Benjen being there was probably a huge factor into why he willingly went there too.
LT Butterfly287
2024-05-14 21:45:33 +0000 UTCOnly Rhaenys
Marcelo Marcal
2024-05-05 23:56:35 +0000 UTCsmall harem. Margaery and Rhaenys (for Dornes support) and maybe throw in some concubines or lovers.
Thedog
2024-04-27 13:26:02 +0000 UTCBig harem
maxime bégin
2024-04-19 13:37:30 +0000 UTCJust Dany
Gabby
2024-03-15 21:29:41 +0000 UTCNo harem
Gabby
2024-03-15 21:29:34 +0000 UTCBig harem
Robert Brown
2024-03-14 20:37:49 +0000 UTCAre you asking why Daenerys will be with Jon in this story? Well, I really like her character from the books, and the show before Season 8.
Drinor
2024-03-06 17:09:57 +0000 UTCBig Harem
Roger Aymerich
2024-03-06 17:00:52 +0000 UTCCan I ask a question why Daenerys? Her character is set up by Martin in such a way that the woman is literally drenched in blood, and please he did that on purpose [(D&D) probably didn't get it right] but Martin also goes in the right direction. So I ask you why? Please don't forget Jon will definitely be trained like a real Stark, Lyrra will make sure of that, and Grandma will tell him who he really is, sry Ned. Incest then please Rhaeny's new character here you can let off steam literary. Daenerys is practical, second hand and her upbringing wow, she is a Targaryen but only a princess not a queen. Just a question for me: Ser Arthur Dayne dead? typical Martin he had a plan for Jon from the start of the wall why dies the best swordsman since Deamon Blackfyre
Timecka
2024-03-04 22:42:30 +0000 UTCBig harem house Targaryen is too close to extinction, this is a good ass fanfic too, I’m always annoyed of Ned being too much of a little bitch in standing up for Jon, and it’s really satisfying to finally see SOMEONE CALL OUT CATELYN ON HER BULLSHIT
Kaden Holder
2024-02-27 01:21:40 +0000 UTCSmall
J
2024-02-25 01:11:51 +0000 UTCBig Harem. Need to repopulate House Targaryen with some strong ladies; mayhaps some of the ladies get together first
Longclaw16
2024-02-22 01:54:09 +0000 UTCA small harem, definitely include Daenerys. As for the 2nd/3rd ladies you can do a poll
Precious C.
2024-02-20 16:56:59 +0000 UTCSmall Harem. It's easier to manage jealousies, inheritance, and character development. Too large, then it's just another mass harem fic with little to no character development
HeirOfRohan
2024-02-18 06:22:54 +0000 UTCSmall Rhaenys and a Lady from North Dacey or Wynafryd
Timecka
2024-02-14 09:49:27 +0000 UTCSmall Harem, Dany/Rhaenys and you can maybe add 1 more lady to it. Jon marrying too many ladies would be complicated to plot tbh.
Leorichs
2024-02-13 19:47:35 +0000 UTCThat Slap was satisfying as hell!!! Also, a small harem
Abyss
2024-02-13 19:19:27 +0000 UTCBig Harem, good story
Bouttefeux Pierre-yves
2024-02-13 18:35:14 +0000 UTCSmall
Franklin Perez
2024-02-13 10:43:29 +0000 UTCOh and big harem man go all the way
Andres
2024-02-13 01:15:22 +0000 UTCthe only thing that I love more than this is a Jon Snow becomes samurai story we don’t have nearly enough of those, the idea of Jon becoming a katana wielding badass with martial arts skills to boot is something that never fails to make me smile if you feel inspired drinor this are other fics that take this idea Rising son, Jade Dragon and Ghost of Yi Ti have a nice day
Andres
2024-02-13 01:14:41 +0000 UTCExcellent story man I always hate the fact that raised by wolves stopped when things were becoming interesting and to see you take on this is a gift
Andres
2024-02-13 01:07:54 +0000 UTCSmall harem fits better with the Targaryen theme, and I was thinking Daenerys and, since you’ve kept Lyarra alive you could make it so that Rhaenys somehow made it out of king’s landing. So my thoughts are that you make a Targaryen harem. 🤷🏽♂️
Aaron Smith
2024-02-12 21:11:21 +0000 UTCBig
SpinachGlad28
2024-02-12 20:54:14 +0000 UTCI would say big but it depends on who.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2024-02-12 18:39:58 +0000 UTCOhhh that’s interesting! And if Rhaenys survived, I hope she’s paired with Jon
TheWateringWizard
2024-02-12 18:24:07 +0000 UTCA small harem at most. I feel like more than 2 women and you can’t properly develop them and their relationship with Jon (Daemon). I want the girls to be more than lemon material and I would like to see a nice relationship fleshed out for them and Jon. Regarding the story, the idea is awesome and I can’t wait to read more ! With such a great and loving grandma like Lyarra, Jon is sure to grow up to be an awesome and fierce King. He isn’t going to take shit from anyone. I feel like Catelyn might hate him even more here because she sees how much Lyarra loves Jon rather than her “proper” grandson. For the harem, I hope Dany is part of it and that Lyarra pushed to go and find them. I think she wouldn’t want her grandson’s family to be left to fend for themselves for too long. But that’s just my opinion and ideas. Can’t wait to see what you write !
TheWateringWizard
2024-02-12 18:21:49 +0000 UTCBig but the ladies matter so I think a poll is in order
Michael Marquardt
2024-02-12 03:22:05 +0000 UTCPersonally small harem or no harem, if its to big it’s difficult to follow whats going on with each female character.
Brett Foley
2024-02-12 01:36:54 +0000 UTCBig
DB#05
2024-02-12 00:47:13 +0000 UTCPersonally, I would say small.... it feels like there's a better character development if there's less women to have a relationship with Jon.
Lost_Monarch
2024-02-11 20:54:37 +0000 UTCBig harem
Moban
2024-02-11 20:06:13 +0000 UTCBig harem and I hope dany will be one of them.
RuGard190
2024-02-11 16:51:16 +0000 UTCBig harem. And I hope Ashara Dayne will be in it. This will be good revenge on Ned Stark, oh, forgive the stag Baratheon (I can’t perceive him as a Stark, Cregan Stark would turn over in his grave if he knew who heads his house), for wanting to send Jon to the wall.
Tariel Khalvashi
2024-02-11 12:51:57 +0000 UTCBig harem but do a poll and also the ladies you have in mind because this a daemon story so we wanna see what fits in daemons criteria of a woman
Winter
2024-02-11 12:45:25 +0000 UTCyep different is all I'm asking bro. and i respect you as a writer to not ask for any spoilers or hints.
Kinggn
2024-02-11 12:18:13 +0000 UTCI’m happy you liked it
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:17:11 +0000 UTCThis story will have lemon scenes sometimes, and there will be a warning before the scene starts.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:16:55 +0000 UTCRoger That
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:15:32 +0000 UTCJon’s dragon will be different in this story. But let’s not do spoilers for now.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:14:59 +0000 UTCRight now, this story won’t be updated that often, but once A Dragon Kissed by Sun is completed, there will be more updates. Daenerys is definitely in the pairing.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:13:47 +0000 UTCDaemon’s dragon will be different, but let’s keep it a secret for now.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:12:05 +0000 UTCThe Fate of the Targaryen family will be revealed soon. Daemon(Jon) will have an unusual dragon, but that dragon is quite familiar to those who played Elden Ring.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:10:55 +0000 UTCWell, Ned will get much more criticism, especially when Lyarra and Jon return, but he Will also learn from his mistakes.
Drinor
2024-02-11 12:08:45 +0000 UTCwell for this story big harem.
MAEGHT Maxime
2024-02-11 10:36:06 +0000 UTCI prefer small harem but it is your story thus your decision.
Leyte1978 Leyte1978
2024-02-11 09:37:21 +0000 UTCIf you do something, do it right, big harem.
Demeter Istvan
2024-02-11 06:48:44 +0000 UTCBig harem
Lastresort
2024-02-11 05:21:25 +0000 UTCSmall harem
Harpy81
2024-02-11 01:32:08 +0000 UTCDrinor you just don’t miss do you? Can’t wait to follow this story!
Abdoulaye Sarr
2024-02-11 01:29:54 +0000 UTCExcellent first chapter. Could you leave out a harem for your followers that don’t like reading lemons. All your other stories do and that could be a compromise.
Akinola Ologunde
2024-02-11 00:25:59 +0000 UTCMake a poll Can’t wait!
Ed Bro
2024-02-10 23:59:17 +0000 UTCBig harem
Juan Jimenez-tinajero
2024-02-10 22:53:40 +0000 UTCSmall harem
Brian Green
2024-02-10 22:19:13 +0000 UTCSmall harem
Wesley Sadzedwicz
2024-02-10 22:07:52 +0000 UTCBig harem
Shadowflare300
2024-02-10 21:00:39 +0000 UTCoh no... harem again
reikon aijin
2024-02-10 20:20:10 +0000 UTCSmall harem, maybe push it to 4 but small.
Kitsune
2024-02-10 20:04:09 +0000 UTCSmall harem. Easy to manage
Xicor
2024-02-10 19:09:29 +0000 UTCLol Big Mama Wolf Lyarra. Big Harem, have him somehow make the 7 have a main Wife and 7 others one from each of the 7 kingdoms
Gamer_Jaystewart
2024-02-10 19:02:46 +0000 UTCBig harem my good sir please, there are too many choice women to leave out.
Daeron Targaryen
2024-02-10 19:00:09 +0000 UTCdefinitely small harem like Aegon. make him the conqueror come again. the 2nd conqueror. and bro give him the full dragonwolf treatment. with Ghost and a mythical type dragon which was never seen before.
Kinggn
2024-02-10 18:50:43 +0000 UTCI prefer a small harem. What is the pairing of the harem for this story, are there some nailed on characters such as: Dany or Rhaenys for example, where as the rest can change easily and how often will it be updated?
TheChosenOne
2024-02-10 18:30:36 +0000 UTCI would say small harem with 3 girls so they can get proper exposure and personality. Also its more realistic that way.
FangRu
2024-02-10 18:29:24 +0000 UTCBig harem and for a dragon why not have daemon find 3 eggs to match daenerys
Sam
2024-02-10 18:16:15 +0000 UTCOh big harem for sure
StonygoblinJR
2024-02-10 18:14:47 +0000 UTCBig harem
Fanfiction lover
2024-02-10 18:03:04 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter already liking the lyarra parenting daemon I think that would been the way lyanna would have done to lady Tully I already hate her. Can't wait to see what happened to the targaryen family and if rhaenys and daenerys will be paired to daemon. I can't wait to see ghost and which dragon is going to be with daemon
Robert Hernandez
2024-02-10 17:59:13 +0000 UTCLoving it so far but would love to see more hate thrown at good old ned
JayFireblood
2024-02-10 17:59:07 +0000 UTCI hope you get better. The other two stories will be updated soon.
Drinor
2024-02-10 17:56:49 +0000 UTCYes, it was on the teaser of this Story.
Drinor
2024-02-10 17:56:09 +0000 UTCWas this a rewrite? I remember the first half of it on a previous post.
BlackFish
2024-02-10 17:55:04 +0000 UTCAhhhhhhh i have to spend a whole week starying today on bed cause i pulled a shit ton of ligaments in my legs keep it coming with a prince of house targaryen and dance of the dragonwolf please ❤️❤️❤️❤️
thunderforth rc
2024-02-10 17:10:21 +0000 UTC
