A Prince of House Targaryen Chapter 78 (An Innocent Boy)
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Yeah, the plot is great but there is a bit too much canon being mixed in. At times it feels like you are trying to include canon events even though it does not make sense. I find the whole Blackfyre arc/thread to be too much like you are going to include the whole exile Targaryen portion of canon into the story. Basically, it is too canon focused considered the number of ripples from stones being dropped in. Though still would finish the story.
Delta105
2024-05-03 01:20:47 +0000 UTCJon hates Catelyn, but in his mind, he has already taken their father away, and he doesn’t want the people he used to call siblings, especially Arya to have no parents in Winterfell. Tommen’s death has many players involved, but hints will be given on who really killed him. A few hints were already given in this chapter.
Drinor
2024-01-18 19:42:14 +0000 UTCWorst decision by Jon and Rhaegar was not to exile Catelyn too. Someone else may have calmed tensions but with her murmuring in Robb's ear there won't be any form of calming tensions. Cersei is always a cunt... Wouldn't put it past Tywin or Baelish to poison Tommen and blame the Darrys
Longclaw16
2024-01-17 21:07:26 +0000 UTCRobb is only 14, and he needs to rule the entire North. Is not really a surprise that he’s allowing his emotions to make every decision for him.
Drinor
2024-01-17 14:23:42 +0000 UTCI’m pretty sure the North has glass gardens. They are mentioned in the books. And the North were able to survive even before Aegon for 8K years, but it was much harsher back then.
Drinor
2024-01-17 14:22:10 +0000 UTCRobb’s plan is to imprison Jon and not kill him so House Targaryen will not dare to attack under the threat of killing Jon, but Robb’s plan is extremely flawed and will blow up in his face. Also remember Rickon, because he is important, remember how Grey Wind growled at him.
Drinor
2024-01-17 14:19:59 +0000 UTCRobb’s plan is doomed to fail the fool is trusting Roose Bolton, I mean it would have failed even if Roose was not involved. The stupid boy will bring the downfall of the Starks, all because he can’t control his emotions
Jamil c
2024-01-17 05:00:45 +0000 UTCSo I realize this is fiction and fanasty, but I think you have created a plot hole know. We all know Robb is young and he feels betrayed by the knowlegde that his father has been sent to the Wall, I think anyone that age but you have several Lords and Ladies of the North crealy not thinking. Let look at the fact, The North BENT the KNEE because of Dragons, granted House Targ has not had them since the Dance, but you been the knee and now you have a son of House Targ and Stark with a Direwolf and a Dragon. Then you have the whole KINSLAYING in the north, this is something I started to explore in my earlier fic. The North has no farms... The North has no fleets but White Habor and that a trading fleet... A direwolf mother was killed... Your Lord kidnapped the child of the ruling family.... Your Lord and his group killed the uncle to his daughter.... Your Lord killed Kingsguard....
Stefen Moss
2024-01-16 14:03:00 +0000 UTCHere is the issue with Robb’s plan: even if it somehow succeeds, it will bring fire and death upon the North, and house Stark will forever be condemned as Kin-slayers in the eyes of the old gods. They would also be the prime suspects and they would have to deal with all the other Targaryen dragon riders. It is sad that the last true stark (aka Benjen) was basically allowed to go to the wall, leaving only stags/trouts who are pretending to be wolves. Also Ned made his bed when he kidnapped Jon as a baby, but instead of actually treating him like a son, he allowed his wife to make his life a living hell, and would probably had sent him to the wall to die, all because he cared more about Robert than his own sister
Gabe Sarti
2024-01-16 10:35:17 +0000 UTCRobb’s plan involves not fighting the Dragons, so obviously, he will fight dirty. House Tully just lost their heir, so they’re already screwed.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:18:28 +0000 UTCI would say Kissed by Sun is 75% Done. As for ‘A Prince,’ I think it is 65% Done. Robb thinks he has a good idea. Whether or not that is an actual good idea is an entirely different matter.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:11:29 +0000 UTCRed Birthday. Robb feels he needs to do right by his father, and second, he feels betrayed by Jon, and all his siblings are not doing okay; Alyanna will never be with him, so Robb is letting his emotions make decisions for him.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:08:53 +0000 UTCNot to mention, Daemon Blackfyre, Euron Greyjoy, and The Army of the Dead are moving, and the Faith of the Seven is not happy with Jon for having two brides. Things will get really Bad.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:05:03 +0000 UTCRemember that something happened to Rickon in Harrenhal, and his direwolf died, which will play a role in the future. Ramsay is like a walking time bomb. It might blow up in the Stark’s Face.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:02:36 +0000 UTCWell, it could also be Garth, the character who was introduced in this chapter. He’s the heir of House Darry and is betrothed to Myrcella. If Tommen dies, then he becomes the future ruler of Riverlands. Or maybe Tommen just choked on the cake.
Drinor
2024-01-16 10:00:29 +0000 UTCCan’t believe Robb thinks he can realistically fight Aemon. The only thing I can think of is kill him with a dagger on the back, and even then there are other dragon riders to deal with. Like father like son. One more stag than wolf, other more trout than would, but both soon to lose themselves in their bitterness. House Tully fall would be extremely funny❤️ Only House I dislike more than them is Hightower
Loyalist
2024-01-16 03:06:08 +0000 UTCI really hope the North can eventually wise up. They're acting like fools and if, by some miracle, Robb dealt with Jon (which he wont), does he not realise he'd still have to deal with far more than just Jon? Seems to me we'll have another rebellion soon with the seeds that are being planted in the North and Riverlands. Even now, after everything, Catelyn still can't accept that he's not a bastard but of a higher standing than her and her family. I really cannot wait to see certain characters brought low. Hopefully Jon finds a way to make peace with his remaining northern family after everything happens, as I expect some wont make it out. When will 'kissed by sun' be updated? How many chapters are left of 'a prince' and 'kissed by sun' fanfic?
TheDarkPrince
2024-01-16 00:45:51 +0000 UTCI’m completely conflicted, I feel bad for Jon but I also feel bad for the Starks. Because regardless on who’s right or wrong everyone is negatively affected. I bet Lyanna Stark is turning in her grave, because this is basically setting up a fight between Jon and Robb. So Tommen is dead now? It seems like he basically took Joffreys place in the “Purple Wedding” even though you can’t really call it that in this situation. Poor guy.
Dark Knight
2024-01-15 22:57:57 +0000 UTCHonestly i feel bad for the the starks but catelyn is being manipulated by cersei yet she cucked her own brother with jamie as the kids are not edmures so cersei is just igniting more drama to rile the stupid trout to tell her son that jon is a threat to them all and robb is falling for it because hes angry that his father was sent to the wall as mercy instead of execution the northerners are stubborn but not smart to see that having the wildings make them a bigger population as the north is big with the wildings they will be much bigger and fearsome if they all band together but the northerners are selfish and only see the negative jon will make sure they see the reason why they say dont wake the dragon
Winter
2024-01-15 21:48:00 +0000 UTCDamn things are looking bleak… the North are still being idiots, what a bunch of self-righteous pricks… Whatever Robb is thinking about, it won’t end well for him and the North. They really need to get their heads out of their asses and fast. Ramsay also being in Winterfell isn’t good. I fear that the last chocking episode from Tommen might be the real thing, poor kid.
TheWateringWizard
2024-01-15 21:41:17 +0000 UTCI already know the culprits for the scheming in the chapter lord baelish, varys, and the bastard Ramsey Bolton who else profits from the war baelish gets catalyn varys gets daemon on the throne after killing viserys Ramsey gets control of the north but it will all bite them in the but they'll know not to wake the dragon
Robert Hernandez
2024-01-15 21:04:36 +0000 UTCWell, some of them are still angry that Ned was sent to the Wall, and now Aemon wants the Wildlings to be brought South of the Wall. But they should also see the many good things they can receive by allowing the Wildlings south of the Wall, but many of them are focusing on the downside.
Drinor
2024-01-15 20:57:22 +0000 UTCThe North annoys me. They remember the slights they receive but not those they give to others.
Zeldris
2024-01-15 20:50:37 +0000 UTCThere will be no BS. If Robb wants to fight Jon, then he will face realistic Consequences. And he should remember what Jon told him that will happen if Robb decides to Rebel. 🔥
Drinor
2024-01-15 20:46:21 +0000 UTCScrew the north and house stark. If they are able to somehow stand against the targaryens, then it would be bs. Hope you don’t pull some bs where Robb becomes a genius leader that wins everything
Sal
2024-01-15 20:43:13 +0000 UTC
