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The Purple Flash of Kumo Chapter 33 (A Master of Purple Lightning)

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This was one of the most nonsensical chapters I've ever seen, Naruto freaking out over nothing, his healing not working as it should because yes, Naruto suddenly running to his death, lol. ... Well, expecting logic from a fanfic is just an attempt at brain dead, it started to get weird when Youroichi suddenly appeared, and in the same chapter she was already having sex with him, without any development compared to Samui. Although the same thing happened with Mabui so meh, keep reading, keep reading.

Victor Weismann

Because I’m trying to make it so that being a medical shinobi is much more complicated than it was in Cannon, wounds are a big deal and not just something one can heal without problems.

Drinor

Any reason you’re nerfing his healing ability?

Tex

I’m glad you liked it

Drinor

keep up the good work

Zyeith

That will be quite funny actually. Naruto will just enjoy roasting them.

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. ❤️

Drinor

Can’t wait to see how he interacts with the sand siblings and the Konoha genin during the Chunnin Exams.

Anthony Rodriguez

This was an amazing chapter

Joker


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