A Prince of House Targaryen Chapter 76 (Leaving Harrenhal)
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Their whole thing will be quiet complicated, especially with Dany. I’m sorry for very late reply.
Drinor
2024-01-23 16:43:19 +0000 UTCHow? I have read the books, and I’m sure that’s not a thing. All R’hollor does is send visions and revive the dead sometimes when a sacrifice is made.
Drinor
2024-01-02 07:47:55 +0000 UTCR'hollor wouldn't allow his priestesses to remain in captivity. They would be trained to kill themselves before they could be used for dark sorcery.
McGrundy
2024-01-01 23:18:38 +0000 UTCAre both arianne and Dany joining aemons harem. I see Aemon being a big part danys story in the future and rhaenys would most likely encourage Doran to allow Ariane being married to aemon
Robert Hernandez
2023-11-29 19:35:54 +0000 UTCWhat Ned heard in his dream is actually very important. Maybe you can guess why. I hope you liked the Chapter.
Drinor
2023-11-21 12:01:55 +0000 UTCThe Horns will be very important in the future, but let’s not do spoilers.
Drinor
2023-11-21 11:56:47 +0000 UTCI haven’t read the chapter yet but the beginning is giving me Eren talking to his Dad vibes. “On your feet Dad”
Trious
2023-11-21 07:31:00 +0000 UTCDamn Euron is worrying me big time… I wanna be confident and say that his horn won’t work and is bullshit but who knows what it might do…
TheWateringWizard
2023-11-21 07:22:05 +0000 UTCJon x Rhaenys if shes alive in the new story or x Daenerys or both if you feel like it.
TheWateringWizard
2023-11-21 07:21:20 +0000 UTCSilverwing and the other dragon will show up very soon. Thank you for your suggestion
Drinor
2023-11-21 06:22:05 +0000 UTCHope Silverwing will show up soon for Egg. As for a pairing, JonXMargaeryXDaenerysXMissandei
Longclaw16
2023-11-21 01:14:16 +0000 UTCYour thinking about the first Bellegere Otherys, but most women from her line who is a courtesan has the same name. Just type in Game of Thrones, Black Pearl and you'll see who I'm talk about
Dante Johnson
2023-11-20 11:22:52 +0000 UTCTatakae
Drinor
2023-11-20 11:14:33 +0000 UTCIsn't she dead or over 100+ years old by the time A Game of Thrones starts? But that could still work with some magic, as many do with Shiera Seastar.
Drinor
2023-11-20 11:14:04 +0000 UTCAoT references going crazy
Leviathanman
2023-11-20 08:31:24 +0000 UTCI only ask because she's a great character, and the only fics with that pairing are smut only fics
Frodran
2023-11-19 19:43:21 +0000 UTCToo bad, but at some point you should do a JonxSansaxArya because I feel like there aren't many stories with that trio. And well, if you don't want to put Sansa and Arya, can you put a Lady of the North? Not Alys Karstark or Meera Reed, how about one of the Manderly girls, JonxWynafryd's couple honestly catches my attention. Yes, I know they are not common couples but I think Jon has more opportunities to start his journey with a girl from the North...Please think about it. Then will be JonxDaenerysxAriannexMargaeryxWynafryd. Or JonxDaenerysxAriannexMargaeryxWylla.
Darth Glorius
2023-11-19 18:46:01 +0000 UTCYour welcome
Mason Talbert
2023-11-19 17:23:00 +0000 UTCIt makes me worry about his state of mind because he threatened to burn the north which is his mothers home, the place he was raised (even if unhappily), and Arya, Bran, and Rickon who still love Jon live in the north. That is what worries me, would he really be willing to hurt them too? They are still just children in this universe.
Mason Talbert
2023-11-19 17:22:36 +0000 UTCYeah I can definitely see that especially since Robb wasn’t a smart man to begin with otherwise he probably wouldn’t have been killed.
Mason Talbert
2023-11-19 17:15:31 +0000 UTCYes, i meant Sansa, sorry for the mistake and thank you for pointing that out
Loyalist
2023-11-19 14:54:37 +0000 UTCHow does that make you worry for his state of mind? Dragons burn things, it what makes them so powerful. Jon saw Winterfell as a prison, so what's wrong with burning down a prison if they chose war? Don't forget, Jon is having a child with Val, family first
Dante Johnson
2023-11-19 12:42:56 +0000 UTCI think a Jon x Bellegere Otherys would be new. She does have targaryen blood in her veins
Dante Johnson
2023-11-19 12:39:55 +0000 UTCI’m not really into Jon/Arya or Jon/Sansa, but Jon in this story will be an incredibly powerful swordsman, but let’s wait and see.
Drinor
2023-11-19 12:13:15 +0000 UTCNo offense to anyone, but I’m not really a big fan of Jon/Sansa or Jon/Arya. As for the others, they are good suggestions.
Drinor
2023-11-19 12:11:52 +0000 UTCThat wouldn’t be a bad idea, but let’s not do spoilers for now.
Drinor
2023-11-19 12:10:27 +0000 UTCSome people can’t let go of the anger and jealousy they feel. Some people just don’t change. Robb, in this one, has his reasons to be against Jon, reasons he has brought up more than once. Jon is suddenly a prince and has already married Val, a woman that Robb lusted after when they were in Winterfell. Jon is better than him in Swordfighting, and Robb knows it. Jon has a dragon, and Robb knows that alone makes Jon much more powerful than him. Robb is still only 14, and so many things are happening that are just overwhelming to him: his father going to the Wall, the knowledge that he can’t be with Alyanna, he is suddenly the Head of House Stark, all that is way too much for Robb, and in his eyes, Jon sent Ned to the Wall, and Robb knows his father will never be there to see his grandchildren grow old, but he is still a child who doesn’t want to blame his parents for what is happening, and he doesn’t want to admit to himself that his father was at fault not Jon, for this reason, Robb decides to sent all his anger and frustration towards Jon.
Drinor
2023-11-19 12:08:51 +0000 UTCNed’s talk with Robb might be revealed in the next Chapter, but the story is going to speed up a little. As for A Hungry Dragon, I’m not sure yet since I’m still planning on the story’s arcs since Jon in that one is quite ruthless and cunning.
Drinor
2023-11-19 11:59:17 +0000 UTCI get what you’re saying I just think it’s a shame that it’s come to this and to me it’s just kind of sad that family is now technically against family. Also I’m genuinely curious as to how Lyanna would have reacted to this? To see her husbands family going to war with her brothers family. (If it comes down to it). Also, I realized something - what you just said “what he remembers is Ned’s betrayal, Cats disdain, and Sara imitation of his mother” (Did you mean Sansa?). What I realize is that whenever Cat saw Jon she was instantly reminded of Ned’s cheating which is why she hated him and well with what you said I hope that Jon doesn’t turn out like her, meaning every time he thinks of his mothers family I hope he doesn’t just think about the negative like Cat does/did because he obviously wouldn’t want to be like her. So I just hope that he doesn’t only ever think about the negative and the past because that is something that Cat would do.
Mason Talbert
2023-11-19 02:24:57 +0000 UTCPlease cut out the dothraki language part. You threw some letters together and called it dothraki. Some of it even has english mixed in. Write it in english, but in bold, to show that it's dothraki language being spoken.
A.mnz
2023-11-19 01:49:55 +0000 UTCI think a Jon x Arya fic would be great. Especially since Jon would be more into his stark side in this fic
Frodran
2023-11-19 01:43:08 +0000 UTCOr...JonxSansaxAryaxDaenerysxMargaery.
Darth Glorius
2023-11-19 01:22:04 +0000 UTCOh, I love the chapter...Maybe JonxSansaxAriannexMargaeryxDaenerys.
Darth Glorius
2023-11-19 00:21:08 +0000 UTCYes but family is not only blood, and in this universe a good part of his life was spent among the Free Folk. What he remembers is Ned betrayal, Cat disdain and Sansa imitation of his mother contempt. Jon is probably being practical about it. If Robb start a war the longer it goes on, the bigger the danger for his family and the world with the Others approaching. Even if they are blood related you must put them down or you risk others raising against the dragons. Love it and so cool to see House Targaryen restored to his rightful glory
Loyalist
2023-11-19 00:08:10 +0000 UTCShould Rhaenys be alive in the setting for this new story then it would be cool to see Jon/Rhaenys pairing as at least the main one.
OwnedOne
2023-11-18 23:00:34 +0000 UTCJon X Ariannne. From the interaction between Robb and Ned it seems like Robb isn’t dropping his anger towards Jon at all and only said it in the presence of his father it honestly seems like a set up for a potential war between Jon and Robb, I also didn’t like Jon’s threat to the North because that honestly sounds like something the Mad King would have said and honestly it kind of makes me worry about his state of mind a little bit. Another thing I didn’t like about his threat is that I believe that he sounds kind of arrogant, I get the fact that he has a dragon and that gives him a big advantage but that does not guarantee victory, I sincerely hope he realizes that. I’m sorry if this sounds a bit negative, I just find the interactions in this chapter a bit disturbing because regardless of the hate between Jon and the Starks they are still his family through his mother.
Mason Talbert
2023-11-18 22:29:06 +0000 UTCIn an hungry dragon, would Rhaenys be alive or not? I would say either she or Dany. It may sound cliché, but if is good then is good. I would like to see Ned talk with Robb in the future and the one with the banners. It will be very interesting
Loyalist
2023-11-18 22:19:16 +0000 UTC