A Spirit of Elements Chapter 48 (Korra, The Avatar)
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Naruto and Kurama’s friendship in the future will be quite complicated. Asami and Korra are indeed quite important to Naruto. They will be his moral compass with how the story will go.
Drinor
2023-11-16 22:27:19 +0000 UTCI think this is a small to a big part of the story cause right now Naruto is at his lowest point which he will need both Korra and Asami at his side. They are both his yin and yang in the story. I have a feeling naruto will start to bound with kurama when the time comes for them to fight vatuu and Unalaq which I can't wait to read about I have a strong feeling that fight is going to be epic and the other villains lerking in the shadows will be too
Robert Hernandez
2023-11-16 01:38:28 +0000 UTCHer decision really does fit past avatars big choices especially when they let dangerous enemies live. And I love how she’s technically not lying either you can count bijuu as spirits they have no body, take over people and they are not of the human world. Kuruk really helped her out too it made sense. Regarding kyoshi I think her advice was the worst because seriously if Naruto is possessed what’s stopping spirit jumping bodies? That’s quite a list of enemies for Naruto I can’t wait to see it I guess just like canon manga he has to prove to people he’s not a monster. And I forgot I also love korra thoughts on asumi and Naruto and all their relationship this was a very good building chapter
GrouchyGritic
2023-11-15 08:52:13 +0000 UTCThe Ying Part is inside Minato, who is Dead…💀 Well, that’s the reason why many people in the story are afraid of Naruto’s true power. Sure, they can bend Elements, but an explosion that can wipe out an entire city like The Republic City is something they have never seen before. Saving Naruto will be very difficult for Korra.
Drinor
2023-11-15 08:51:39 +0000 UTCKuruk’s advice to Korra is what stuck with her the most. It’s very important for the future of her character and her development. Well, she used the term ‘spirit’ because she has no idea what other term to use since ‘Jinchuuriki’ and ‘Bijuu’ are not terms she’s aware of. Korra will have enemies when it comes to saving Naruto, mainly the Earth Queen, Unalaq, and the many people who will be against Naruto being free.
Drinor
2023-11-15 08:48:01 +0000 UTCI have noticed myself that my stories tend to drag a little. I’m working on fixing that problem. This Chapter is probably the most important Chapter for Korra as a Character.
Drinor
2023-11-15 08:42:08 +0000 UTCGreat chapter for us! This reminds me of the good old early Shippuden where days where an unstable and out of control Naruto was one of the biggest issues that faced the heroes. It’s pretty sad in this world there is no wood style, Rinnegan or Sharingan (and or even Uzumaki sealing chains) to restrain Tailed beast chakra. This world naruto is even more dangerous due to the fact nobody can really stop naruto and he doenst have a place like the waterfall go truth to get control over Kurama chakra. I have been wondering. It’s not that important but Naruto still only has Yang Kurama inside of him right?
William Kwok
2023-11-14 22:42:25 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! Love korra’s locality and while I get some of what mako is saying I really dislike him. The avatars getting shaken loose and being able to talk to korra was a great touch and I agree with korra kyoshi likes to tell people take extreme solution when she fucked up her own. So korra is telling public it’s a spirit despite being told it’s not which in a way is good as it will give Naruto some sympathy I wonder if she will pull the jinchurki excuse ( if you kill him spirit will be unleashed. Very delicate matter The only other solution would be face swap like Zuko mom
GrouchyGritic
2023-11-14 21:20:22 +0000 UTCI admit this plot section feels like it's dragging on to me. It's a Naruto story without Naruto in it, and the temptation to just tune out until it's resolved is real. That whinging aside, wonderful character work as always, solid prose and structure!
Erinnyes
2023-11-14 20:55:31 +0000 UTC
