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Mr. Wright's origins

first episode of the next long comic!

As I said, not much sex in this first story, it's kind of introduction. 

Who is Mr. Wright? Why he is so addicted to dicks? Let's find out ;)

And yes, there is a young Dr. Hoover here!

I will post a pdf at the end of the story, meanwhile just a zip with the jpg inside!


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Comments

wow back story amazing can't wait for next page

Edward Miller

We need to go on. And you will find new followers. No doubts. I believe in your taste and I think you will find the balance between stories and hot sex ! i love your comics!

Sergiu

Thanks so much for your opinions! I assure you it will be full of sex. What do you mean with "save some communications"? You think that they talk too much? Too much sex? I would like to post more comics, but one long comic each month is a lot of work. I can't do more. Mostly coloring and text take a lotnif time. Anyway I will try! I didn't give up with 007 and the explorer, but I want ti finish some stories I started. Cody, Denny, Papa Island...and many more. In Twitter I have the same name @freebo23 Yes, tumblr was a great loss...I really miss my blog and all the other bkogs about daddies and their sexy asses! And all the writers blogs...they were really inspiring. Well, we need to move on, right? Keep writing me! Hugs

freebo23

I like the idea! For me all that you make its interesting. And i like talks, increasing conflict and desire and some intrigue in THE ORIGINS and not only sex in even single frame (by the way starting 2 pics with wide open pussy of boss creampie and oral the are hot) . I am not worry i am sure will be a lot of sex later in parts 2-4 and with this prolog part 1 its even more interesting. But please save some commications and talking and moans)) in parts 2-4 during sex may be too! F. E. I so liked your story about Visiting GrandPapa - they communicated good- hung twins +greedy beefy grandPa and even grandma)). For me here is only one problem with your patreon- for me not enough one comic per month, I would like 2 or 3 or 4 :)) and more images. But in any case, I will definitely save my subscription to help develop your profile and your creativity. I think you need to advertise yourself more on Twitter, so that the loss of one or two fans (and this is normal this waves +-) wil be compensated by the influx of new fans in an even greater number. Its pity Tumblr died I have not yet found the alternative. And please be yourself. I am gratefull for pics of agent 007 and scientist in Jungle. But i dont ask the comic because you need your own inspiration and comics its big job. But interactive sharing of ideas here on your patreon with your followers (only sometimes) it will be nice i think!

Sergiu

sometimes for getting to a good story one just have to be patient and follow the plot, the excitement will grow slowly maybe but the climax will be majestic, I assure you! And I'm also a bit tired of drawing short stories full of sex and no background. My characters are also growing in the years and they have their own personalities, I like to give them more situations to let all of you know them better. Mr. Wright is a big, sexy motherfucker, he can be also nasty and rude. He is very rich and he likes to show it off. These are all good reasons for him to get hatefucked and gangbanged by all the worst rascals and criminals of Freebopolis.

freebo23

you nailed it! I'm happy someone liked this episode, I just got one negative comment up here :/

freebo23

I cant wait the transformation of Mr. Wright from womanizer to cumdump! All these guys around him are looking full of lust and desire of revenge becouse Mr. Wright is too arrogant and too dandy...His white trousers soon tear because of his huge buttocks. His appearance and behaviour are too provocative, he is in danger! Does he know it? When will be next parts?

Sergiu

Maybe this fulfilled some goal for you but this isn’t something I’m likely to revisit. I won’t even bother with the pdf when you provide it—and this is the first time I’m going to pass on something you created. Hopefully it’s the last—otherwise I will pull my support. Sorry.

Mike Ferber

Ok I'll add it tomorrow!

freebo23

On my phone prefer pdf ;) thanks

Ayem

It worked for me, try sorting your files by name.

Likeburly1

added

freebo23

for save the jpg you can also open each image on a new tab and save them

freebo23

really? it works for me. I will export a pdf with the complete story...not for each episode. I could upload the jpgs though, if the zip doesn't work!

freebo23

Can you upload the pdf versions again. The zips upload out of order

Eli


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