Shock Boy vs Captain Silver!

Thanks for the feedback 😋 well, this comic is pretty old... It was a commission, the plot, texts and characters were written by a follower. I actually like to draw more complicated comics and stories, they give to the sex scenes more background, so also the sex is hotter. But that's just my opinion. About the colors, I like go experiment and use different palette. I think this one give to the comic a sci-fi feeling.

freebo23

Artistically I find this very impressive. But I think most guys like me gravitate towards your work because what you do is really really colorful. So while this was neat to read once I wouldn’t return to it. I thought the limited color palette detracted overall— it was like meeting a black and white comic. For that reason items did not pop like they do in most of your other work . I also thought that there was too much plot and exposition and not enough sex; The ratio is way off. And Sorry but green cocks just don’t do it for me. Mind you all of this is just my opinion, if someone seeks an adventure that leans more towards the plot line of a real comic book then this is it.

Mike Ferber

Nice suggestion! I will think about it

freebo23

Again the sexy chute, the internal view. Dem pecs and nips, hehe that does look like stan from gf. One of my top favorite comics from you. I do have a suggestion, what if since they didn' take off their mask. Next time they find out they know each other's identities? Maybe they're even "closely" known ;p

WallowinMuscle

glad that you like it! thanks!!!

freebo23

Great work !!!

Delannoy Stephane

fuck yeahh!!

freebo23

love to see all the guy take their turn!

David

I agree! thanks for the patience...i liked to draw some fighting scenes and some more dialogues...it was a long and hard work but worth it!

freebo23

I'd like to! I need to find some good ideas though...suggestions are welcome!!!

freebo23

Thanks for putting in the work! I really like the build up. Not every strip needs to start with a fuck :)

Yea please do continue the story!

thanks! was a long work! hope you all like it!!!

freebo23

mmmh...I'm not sure! Maybe Captain Silver beats him with his superbutt?

freebo23

Is Shock Boy going to get any kind of comeuppance?

Daddy McQuaig

That was awesome!!!

WalterP

That internal shot tho! ⚡🍆

Jecofish