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Added 2019-05-03 19:34:11 +0000 UTCHey all. I do hope you are doing alright :). New chapters are up and I hope you like them. Let me know what you think, specifically on the dialogue. I didn't like some of it when I reread.
Next ones Friday in a week. Have a good weekend everybody!
Comments
Thanks for reading :)!
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:34:49 +0000 UTCI think the issue was mostly just all of the encounters being a little too big. She was just one part of a big battle or it was a team fight. With so many abilities going around, her impact feels lacking. Thanks for the feedback and let me know what you think in future chapters!
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:34:38 +0000 UTCThank you for reading and the financial support :)!
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:33:04 +0000 UTCFor me it fit. I just hope the shift isn't too unnatural and quick. I also don't want the next thousand pages to be her wallowing in self pity.
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:32:49 +0000 UTCThank you, really appreciate the positive feedback :).
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:31:25 +0000 UTCNah, that burnt up in the Taleen dungeon. I forgot about it at some point and didn't delete it from my item list so that's completely on me.
G. Harthane
2019-05-04 23:31:06 +0000 UTChidden stat!
j0ntsa
2019-05-04 22:16:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters!
Baba Vader
2019-05-04 11:32:27 +0000 UTCNice seeing illia interacting with some other high level people. It's what I'm here for... And hopefully some monster mashing. Her last few fights against demons and humans feel disconnected and there's no weight to it. Looking forward to more adventures. :P
Benjamin
2019-05-04 09:52:12 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
Corwin Amber
2019-05-03 22:25:59 +0000 UTCI liked the conversation with the cake; it's nice to see Ilea a little bit more light hearted again.
closeded
2019-05-03 21:54:00 +0000 UTCilea's charisma saves the day once more
Matthias
2019-05-03 21:26:33 +0000 UTCI thought the conversation between Ilea and Kyrian was well done actually
Thaabit Rivertree
2019-05-03 21:13:56 +0000 UTCBtw, does ilya still have that cloak of the night?
j0ntsa
2019-05-03 19:39:59 +0000 UTC
