Cartwright and Tenner - Case 1 - Update 5
Added 2022-01-31 10:20:24 +0000 UTCCartwright and Tenner is a choose your own adventure mystery horror comic in which you the audience can suggest actions for the main characters to partake as they investigate their cases.
To suggest an action, all you need to do is comment on the patreon post about what they should do! Feel free to be as detailed as you want! If you make a long post, try to provide a summary in a similar vein to something like this:
- "Action: [Investigate] X"
- "Action: [Talk] to X about Y"
- "Action: [Pick up] X"
- "Action: [Cast] X"
Feel free to comment , suggest actions and speculate!
Credits:
Glaz (@RotundFox) - Artist and Lead Writer
Simmy (@SimmyWuff) - Writer and Editor
Selph (@KaboomPanda, patreon.com/selph) - Writer and Editor
Dee (@WtfGayLilBadger) - Writer and Editor
Jack (@BigCritterJack) - Story Coordinator and Creative Consultant
Jacob Gregory Dammons (@cherrydadgreg) - Story Coordinator and Creative Consultant
Comments
Other comments- a missing mayor? I am sure that won't come up again lol. The wall said 'Learn to Swim' - if perhaps that is a swimming pool decoration, luring Bo there to quickly cool him down in the water might help? Certainly worth thinking about how to dampen him down without further magic. I loved the varied ritual stuff- slightly concerned that magic circle didn't get broken though... Nice to see some more about the relationship between the two leads and how they met. The destroyed sign suggests Bo wasn't there long ago at all- presumably he was aware he was being tailed by the ritual at that point, so tried to conceal where he was going- so they are a maximum of 21 minutes behind him. Limits how far he can go.
Robert Smith
2022-02-11 00:08:55 +0000 UTCFinally managed to read this one in depth- very interesting! Not sure how to help the intrepid detectives right now except... Tenner: Examine the two bloody handprints- is it possible to tell *what* kind of creature is following, and whether it is likely to start interrupting the investigation? Cartwright: Take the photos of Bo and Branson together. The creature is emotional, and seeing images of himself with the one he (presumably?) loves, or at the very least has strong feelings for, might distract him in a confrontation
Robert Smith
2022-02-11 00:05:52 +0000 UTCAction:Prepare for confrontation. We have a location so after a few final tasks it's probbally smarter to take things to the fence. With all the pieces in place make sure Tenner has some degree of protection. This (baby) man needs some kind of defense if this demon tries to bash his brains in. Casting a protection spell may do the trick, but perhaps a bat or pipe may be in order in case things get ugly. Talk: To branson, at least one more time. Get any information about potential distractions,weaknesses, anything able to potentially exploit the possessed in question long enough to exorcise(?) it.
Yulen
2022-02-05 09:43:49 +0000 UTCOkay, so I'd suggest that tenner pokes a bit more into Cartwright. He could be withholding information about this demon that could actually help them. That's all I've got for this week
Steve
2022-02-05 09:25:29 +0000 UTCAction: Return to Branson’s Apartment, taking a different route from how you got here. Debrief Branson on the findings, asking for his aid by your side for the rest of the night. While at the apartment, grab a container of any kind of salt, probably a table salt shaker. On the way to the Baseball Park, run Branson through the specifics of a Deep Possession and means of expulsion, through rituals or otherwise. If Branson gets concerned, perform a Protection ritual on the party with the salt.
Mori
2022-02-03 07:57:38 +0000 UTCAction: Investigate puddle
Star Ringer
2022-01-31 19:05:02 +0000 UTCFantastic work again! That close up of Tenor made him look like he had multiple sets of eyes. Suggestion: if more magic is too risky it may be time for Cartwrite to consider letting Tenor possess him to force Bo's demon out.
Lee Evergreen
2022-01-31 14:18:44 +0000 UTC(From what I can tell) it seems that Cartwright has maybe had previous history with this specific demon , to the point where he's visibly distraught)? I'd propose on him to do something, just not sure what...
Steve
2022-01-31 11:18:42 +0000 UTC
