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Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story

I’m planning to change the story and the artstyle because 1.the art style is not updated 😖 2. I don’t like the compositions

Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story Some of the finished pages for chapter 3 I would like to redraw or change the story

Comments

which chapter again

real ripper

You should make Lizana more hesitant, as if she isn't sure to fuck Ramon(imo)

mattia pascal

Wait what’s wrong with the art styles and composition?

Tobi

Mommy Lizana 🥺❤️

King Crimson

The art style seems perfect to me, getting better and better (I love the first page). I trust you and your work.

Nminato

Wait what’s wrong with the art styles and composition?

Tobi

The paizuri looks great

Deez_Bucketz

Zetto, you answered others, did not answer my question why?:(

Gℴℑℴ

Looks awesome, cant wait to see Lizana in her full glory

Kresynk


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