Mizaru's 2nd guest comic starting soon(TM). What should the first page be like?
Added 2022-08-07 00:48:15 +0000 UTCLeave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with!
I dont think we discussed much about a plot, exactly. Only that there's Marco, riding a train, with a bunch of horny hybrid futas.
so here is where we can talk about!
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Sounds gud to me!
Kenno Arkkan
2022-08-07 02:31:15 +0000 UTCI'd start it off with a bang -- we skip forward in the timeline, Marco stumbling out of the train after just being creampied railed by futas. One of many such train encounters-- the page would end with Marco wondering to herself how it got to this point. -- then we go back in time a few weeks, showing Marco just barely making it to the train in time, she is about to get on when her friend Mala stops her, pointing out that its the 'futa only' train and what'll happen to her if she gets in there with all those horny futas. There we'd see Mugger and Fel thru the train door-- leering at Marco and whispering to eachother~
MizaruSketch
2022-08-07 01:39:21 +0000 UTCAlso, no matter how this comic starts, Marco has to be going late for school, and must be holding a toast in her lips. /This is the law/. Also, i'd just mention somewhere that she's 18 and in her last year of highschool or whatever so we dodge the ""omg they underage" bullet alltogether like a pornmancing Neo.
Kenno Arkkan
2022-08-07 00:54:45 +0000 UTCSo, where exactly is this comic beginning? Is it a sequel to the previous pics? Then we should probably show that somehow within the comic. But im not sure how. It'd be kinda confusing to just put a bunch of pictures in there, and then immediately start a story?? Or should the comic revisit what the pictures showed, and then keep going from there??? 🤔🤔🤔
Kenno Arkkan
2022-08-07 00:51:13 +0000 UTC
