“What’s the next afterhours” idea bin 📨
Added 2022-03-12 04:09:20 +0000 UTCIt’s that magical time again. Here's how it works:
from now until Friday, March 18th, we'll drop ideas for the next comic here, and we'll give likes, (or comments saying "i vote for this" if likes start to fail) to those ideas we're ok with. By all means, give likes to several ideas, not just one.
Once Friday comes around, i'll pick the three most liked and put them on a FINAL poll, that will decide the winner, by Monday 21st, 7pm Mexico city time/CST.
Now, onto the ideas, the usual pointers:
- Think of a story's beginning and ending, that's usually the best way to figure out where to go. we can work the middle as we go. More complex, cohesive ideas usually get voted up.
- Good stories usually involve characters going through a change, orexplore interesting scenarios.
For example:
A) Bonnie has never had sex with a guy➡️Bonnie bones Aldo and is no longer men-virgin.
B) What if hybrids, instead of soldiers, were exotic dancers?
C) What if a human was accidentally confused for a hybrid?
- Make sure to suggest which characters (and versions, futa/standard/genderbend etc) would be involved. Just saying "Butts everywhere" sounds alright but it could mean different things with different characters to different people.
- If possible, suggest how the first one or two pages would look like, that gives me a reference to start the comic with. These pages usually introduce the characters, the setting, and the tone of the story.
- Length can vary, but 10-12 page-long stories are best. That's roughly 2 to 3 months of work.
- Pls don't let the thought of "oh nobody is gonna vote for this" to stop you. I rather have some ideas than none.
- Shorter stories are welcome too! 1-3 pages are totally doable. We just need a solid story or motif to have the toons do some lewds, as usual.
here are previous posts if you wanna bring back an old pitch which is totally doable
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-58041823
happy thinking!
Comments
Well, as said, he's gotta be pretty scrawny. If you want someone to model him after, I recommend Shinji Ikari from Evangelion. That plan, everyday kind of look is what I was thinking of.
RandomBrit
2022-03-16 12:50:53 +0000 UTCI agree with Bonnie. I like when after-hours comics seem to be related to one another, and after-hours 32 already established her as a successful streamer. all i can think is sharon just sneaking around the table, with her back fin showing over the table 😂 Could also be a great opportunity for october, whose mastery is oral sex with added tentacles 🤔
Kenno Arkkan
2022-03-16 04:20:01 +0000 UTCno rules missed, really. Any idea on how this new male protagonist would look like (other than the massive shlong) ? Or is a faceless anime protagonist be good enough?
Kenno Arkkan
2022-03-16 04:16:06 +0000 UTCtthey must have had to won a lottery, like getting a ps5 in japan. That's the true nihongo way.
Kenno Arkkan
2022-03-16 04:12:05 +0000 UTCMaybe as a loose material inline with your sketch comic mod shop, with Bonnie being eighteen and as a gift maybe her and some of the other hybrids with less curves and such sneaking off/sneaking in a roulette of different mods where instead they could be off brand knockoffs from Alex with them being a little too extreme. Or Bonnie overdoing it with some and going on a party spree like a montage through Al's old neighborhood/each security gate. Probably ending with a hangover scene at the sex shop or in one of the security gates break room the next morning.
Alexander
2022-03-15 02:10:44 +0000 UTCNever thought I'd leave an idea, but sod it, a line from the last one gave me an idea I'd like to toss into the ring: Working Title: The Quiet One. Starring: Monica (Main girl), Green, Alex & Fel. Extra Notes: None of the girl's are futa, so no horse-cock Mugger. Length: Unsure. Premise: It’s a night at the Den and Monica is finally breaking the silence on her new boyfriend. She regales them with how things were for her two months prior: Unhappy and without a decent romantic partner, especially one that can last in bed. Despite her pleasant nature, Monica is a size queen and quite wild in bed, and most men she encounters are either all talk, only want a shot of her booty or barely make it ten minutes once she gets her meter running. She makes by with sex toys (courtesy of Alex & Fel) but they're starting to lose their edge. (This can be four or so pages) Then, one night while hunting, Monica stumbles upon a man being stood up for a blind date. His name is Irwin: He’s quiet, unassuming, pretty scrawny and has a history of poor luck with women. He and Monica hit it off amazingly and Monica finds herself really falling for him and, on a night where things get steamy, is fully prepared for sex regardless of whether or not he reaches her standards. (This, I’d like at least, to have some pages. I like my smut with a decent plot and some feels, which is why I became a Patron of yours in the first place) But here’s the twist: Irwin is actually hung. Like, real hung. Like, ‘makes-my-toys-look-tiny’ hung! The reason for his poor history with women? None of them dare try his monster cock. Monica? “JACKPOT!” And what follows is a glorious sexathon where both lover experience the best sex they’ve ever had: Irwin finally enjoying the pleasures of a woman and Monica finding a guy who not only can stir up her guts, but also keep up with her. (Needless to say, lots of ass focus and anal. Seriously, just the good stuff.) Countless well-earned orgasms later, Monica and Irwin fully cermet their relationship. (Gotta have a sweet kiss moment) The story ends and the girls are more than a little eager to meet Monica unassuming stud. Monica, it turns out, is thinking of inviting him over to introduce him to everyone, and introduce him. Needless to say, the girls all concur on the idea. (Final page idea: All the girls falling over themselves in eagerness while Monica watches on, clearly eager for what she’s about to unleash.) Like I said, I’m just tossing this in and seeing if anyone bites. If I’ve missed any rules, which knowing me I might have, do let me know.
RandomBrit
2022-03-12 22:07:32 +0000 UTCplaceholder title: Hookup Hooter starring: Ollie, Alex, Soph (standard versions) Premise: Ollie is moping around the den, being depressed and lonely since there are no men there. Alex becomes annoyed with Ollie's depressing attitude bringing the mood down of the entire den, so she makes Ollie an offer: there happens to be a bodypainting convention in the city, one where hybrids could walk around and socialize with humans without being out of place. In fact, Alex is regular attendee who is famous there for her 'amazingly realistic' bodypaint...and her blowjob skills. Alex will be Ollie's 'wing-woman' and get her some much needed dick. Soph decides to tag along to watch all the fun. opening page(s): First page could be Ollie being mopey around the den, especially when she sees the couples there being affectionate. Maybe end the page with Ollie masturbating with a dildo but ultimately not being satisfied by just silicone anymore. Alex happening to overhear Ollie's frustration that night, she approaches her with her proposition the next morning.
MizaruSketch
2022-03-12 11:25:20 +0000 UTCplaceholder title: Fox-girl Island starring: Alex (many versions), Al, Deniz. the premise: Modern day, far off Japan's mainland, there exists an island-city populated exclusively by fox-girls. In order to preserve this beautiful and unique culture, humans are forbidden... except once a year to impregnate as many women as possible! plot/opening pages: Al and Deniz are part of a very small and lucky group of men who won the privilege of entering Fox-girl Village. (These men are expected to help maintain the population by impregnating as many fox-girls as possible within the week.) They get out of their transportation in the middle of the city where they are wowed by the fox village (which is decorated to greet the men) and the large variety of fox-girls (All of which are eyeing them up). From this point on, Al and Deniz would just travel around the city, meeting all types of fox-girls (goths, nerds, thicc, tomboys,milfs etc) who all treat the men as celebrities (the shyest fox-girls only asking for selfies, hugs, kisses etc.) or breeding stock. This week of debauchery would culminate with a big 'farewell festival'. Women line-up to breed with the men one last time.
MizaruSketch
2022-03-12 11:22:05 +0000 UTCA Summer vacation at the beach. Characters would be Jason, Ollie and Honey. Story go like this Jason wants to take a break from work so he ask Ollie if she want to go vacation with him. She says yes and if Honey can go as well she been working lot so needs a break as well. He agrees to it and take Honey as well. They rent a RV to drive to a private beach that Jason friend let him use. They go on the beach show some skin and have fun. At night we’re the real fun begins with a threesome and girl on girl action. Finish with a climax to end the story.
SirClicks
2022-03-12 06:20:23 +0000 UTCAn anthology comic of the sexy times alluded to in the comic: 1) An expanded scene of Chad and Alpha opening up to each other, ending with Alpha admitting to herself that she doesn't have to be alone forever as penance and that maybe some humans aren't complete garbage - plus we can see how Chad made her howl (or the other way around?) More romantic, 15-20pp 2) A more extensive view into what happened between the end of the movie and Ollie breaking Jason's bed; more eager/carnal, 10-15pp
Will Feral
2022-03-12 06:19:25 +0000 UTCKinda open on which girl should do it. Bonnie fits because young'n'trendy but other girls could use a chance. Maybe a 'guest star' appears at some point to sneak in under the desk.
Mr Ru
2022-03-12 04:28:29 +0000 UTCA new 'chaturbate' AH could be fun. Only the girl(s) cross platform with a sfw site like twitch, like Projekt Melody. Fans are there for the regularly scheduled twitch stream but in another window her chaturbate goes live and chatters are confused until they see the camera is under the desk and she's bottomless.
Mr Ru
2022-03-12 04:24:07 +0000 UTC
