After-hours 33p12 is up, what's next?
Added 2021-09-24 23:55:40 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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yeah a montage of sex in the woods with narration over it sounds like a decent way to end it
MizaruSketch
2021-09-25 12:24:36 +0000 UTCAfter this scene tho, what should the rest of the comic be? My personal idea would be... for the "training camping trip" to derail completely into a "lets see how much and in how many different places and ways can we fuck" extravaganza. Everyone could discuss where does their relationship go from there while they're at it. Mostly Fel and Aldo showing Bonnie the ropes, setting up agreements and limits on what they're looking for in the relationship, and eventually end the comic with them going back home.
Kenno Arkkan
2021-09-25 00:20:40 +0000 UTCAlso, my suggestion would be for this scene to be short-ish? Maybe only another 2 pages, finishing on aldo waking up feeling fantastic, as they have breakfast together, and fel and bonnie just giggle at each other.
Kenno Arkkan
2021-09-25 00:05:55 +0000 UTCAlso idk if you noticed but bonnie will be wearing the previous comic's white shorts, and i intend for fel to wear a crop top like at the start of the comic, and to be bottomless, only wearing a tight thong, cuz who needs pants to protect you for the cold when you're covered in fur am i right? just to have plenty of ass shots while they're at it.
Kenno Arkkan
2021-09-25 00:03:35 +0000 UTChow about next page starts with Fel, already lying on her stomach and pulling aldo's underwear down while licking her lips. Bonnie would be all flustered. "W-what are you doing!? he's asleep!!" Fel would reply: "It's cool, we do this all the time! ". Bonnie would breathe heavily, constantly looking back at aldo's face to see if he's asleep. Fel would continue "It's like a game, you gotta make him cum, without waking him up" And then the succ can begin. the page could end with Fel grabbing bonnie's hand and slipping it by her crotch. "...We can have our own little fun while at it". What do you think?
Kenno Arkkan
2021-09-25 00:02:27 +0000 UTC
