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After-hours 30p4 up, what's next?

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After-hours 30p4 up, what's next?

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she would be taking shots for he spank bank

Arukath Hellsaint

I like the idea of her not telling him. I feel like Fel would be so excited about what's going on, it would just slip her mind she would ask him if it's ok after she sees his shock. Also if they always have bulge's out you'd think they wouldn't need to tell anyone.

and I think it'd be extra hot if Alex helps Fel take her dress off--- and does other assistant stuff like putting condoms on Fel. That'd give Alex stuff to do and establish her role as the host.

MizaruSketch

I'd like to think Mugger would be peeking behind her seat--- getting really turned on at Fel's antics. There's no way Mugger's shorts could contain that huge rod. It could probably just be 1 panel.

MizaruSketch

dayum. hope that fast food place pays well.

MizaruSketch

he's a young horny guy so he'd probably not mind the D to get with a stacked babe like Fel. If Alex or Mugger whip their out, he may have some questions lol.

MizaruSketch

Also, what should mugger be doing? How can we include -her existence- in this page, if possible? :thinking:

Kenno Arkkan

After the reveal, Fel takes her dress off, showcasing her blue heart pasties (same blue as her underwear's band and nail polish obvs 💅 ) as she sits on the guy's lap. The guy is of course super into it by now, groping her titties. "Would you like to fuck me, mister?" Fel would whisper. the guy obviously says yes, boner throbbing between fel's cheeks. "There's just a liiiittle snag, i'm afraid. Anal would be another 100..." Fel would say, waving a strip of condoms next to his face. that's where the page ends. Next page after this one would start with Fel getting railed, with a bunch of bills on her hand/underwear band/stuck in her necklace. I want an immediate change of pace from one page to the other What do you think?

Kenno Arkkan

It's time to enter the bone zone. My suggestion for the next page is for the page to start with an extra lewd blowjob while rubbing fel's ears (gasp) which sends her purring and eye-heart-ing. Fel moves on to licking his shaft (so she can speak) as she turns sideways. Fel's popping a chub already. Now is Fel's "big reveal". We have 2 choices: a) Either Fel told the guy she's got extra gear when they were whispering at the drive thru, so the guy is fully aware of it, but doesn't know just how massive it is. Or B) She didn't, and the guy is up for a surprise. I like portraying positive things in my comics, so I personally vote for (A). Doing otherwise seems like fel is "trapping " the guy or whatever. At the least it's "false advertising" and Alex and Fel are trying to establish a brand here xD. Plus, Fel has 0 reason to be secretive about her junk. One of the reasons the girls are always "bulges out" is because they don't feel outside pressure to "pass" as anything, so they are just themselves. Bulges included. And they are happy with their bodies, so they of course do the opposite of tucking. but what do you think? Should the guy know, or not?

Kenno Arkkan


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