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After-hours 29 p4 up, what's next?

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After-hours 29 p4 up, what's next?

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I think when Green is looking at bonnie she should pat and or grope/jiggle her butt when she says she's slim or "tweak"

Thestooge

pretty much miz xD Also yeah, i forgot eclair! I like the jack of all trades idea a lot :D

Kenno Arkkan

Would Eclair get a beauty shot as well? She could introduce herself last and tell Bonnie that she’s the jack of all trades master of none. She keeps everyone In tip top shape.

SirClicks

I immediately imagined the duos posing like Jojo's with their stands lol

MizaruSketch

idk if next page should end with a hint to the next page. The girls could ask to see bonnie dance. Show what she got! Bonnie would be like "W-what?! here?"

Kenno Arkkan

the bun's out of the bag. How about next page introduces each character of this comic's main cast? I was thinking a series of tall frames, with beautyshots of each one and some narration as Eclair presents each girl to bonniebuns. First would be a beautyshot of bonnie, as the rest of the girls approach her. Green wouldbe like "Hmm you're on the leaner side...". Monica would say "We'll have to "tweak" your diet to fill that scrawny build of yours, babygirl!" Pawsy would be like "Leave her alone, she's fluffy like me, that's all! Borrowing from Lys Argente's idea, i was thinking the girls could belong to distinct "schools" of twerking. Eclair would introduce the girls and the school they belong to. "This is Mary, and Fel you've already met. they are from the Muscle school. They push their bodies to the extreme for the strongest curves" "These are pawsy and ollie. They belong to the same school of fluff like you. They're all about softness and a cute appeal." "Lastly, Green and Monica are our super stars, from the Thick school. No crowd can withstand their bootylicious behinds."

Kenno Arkkan


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