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AH27p29 up, what's next? (last page i think!)

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AH27p29 up, what's next? (last page i think!)

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thats a good idea. a nice big send-off for all of them \o/\o/\o/\o/\o/

MizaruSketch

hmmmmm it is indeed a lot of ground to cover, so maybe a "two page spread" would be enough? Cuz dang it, when will i ever have a chance to draw em as brides 😤😤😤

Kenno Arkkan

My idea would probably be too much work lol but here it is anyway: each girl has a panel of them imagining themselves as a bride so we get a nice final POV beauty shot for all of them saying 'i love you!' then they all collectively beg Al to stay.

MizaruSketch

HOpefully I can compress everything into this page :O The girls open up. Tell aldo how much he has changed them for good. Each one asks to "give me a chance! aldo-kun!" Aldo agrees on staying, they all cheer, but they immediatly look at each other. They start asking again to give them a chance, Polite requests turn into tugs, then into pulls. "What did I get myself into?!" Aldo monologues himself, as the shot zooms away. "...I'll have so much paperwork to do tomorrow". That's the general gist 🤔 Any ideas how to improve on this?

Kenno Arkkan


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