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After-hours 27p27 up, what's next?

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All the waifus have had their turn. How should the comic end on the next few pages? :O

After-hours 27p27 up, what's next?

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yeah I agree that the open ended approach would make everyone happiest regardless of which is their favorite girl.

MizaruSketch

The good ol "run to the airport before they're gone forever". Nice. We have two options. Either choose a girl or leave it open ended like every decent anime would. Thematically I do think the open ended one works better. Choosing a girl would feel like we closed one character arc and left the other 4 open and inconclusive. Kinda like in after-hours 3, the island one, where aldo ends with futafel despite spending most of his hero's journey with Soph. That left me with a weird after-taste.

Kenno Arkkan

this could lead into Fel chasing him down just before he leaves for good to make her final plea for him to stay with her and give her a chance. and after that emotional scene the other girls would catch up to them looking extra sexy and angry. Ending like a harem anime with all the girls fighting over him.

MizaruSketch

OK, so its the next morning at the office and Fel is acting extra friendly with Al thinking they are officially a couple again. Al is giving her the cold shoulder until their break when Fel asks him whats wrong and he confesses that their night together was a mistake and he requested to be transferred to another city to avoid making things awkward between them. So Fel is heartbroken and the other girls are pissed off at her for fucking Al and making him leave.

MizaruSketch


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