AH27p10 up! What's next?
Added 2019-02-23 00:32:14 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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You could make it extra spicy and have Soph not know Al saw her~ so she keeps acting extra girly until Al teases it out of her somehow
MizaruSketch
2019-02-23 05:58:40 +0000 UTCI like the narration over the big beauty shot of Soph. Their day together could start with Al thinking Soph is kind of dull or vapid until he sees her drop the act while at the claw machine. From that point Al starts to take an interest in her.
MizaruSketch
2019-02-23 05:51:55 +0000 UTCHow about Soph has a gyaru-style makeover with Fel's ponytail hairstyle? The implication being that Fel was a gyaru in her youth. And yes to painted nails. Could even take it a step further and have Soph paint stripes on her face to look like Fel.
MizaruSketch
2019-02-23 05:25:02 +0000 UTCHow about next page starts with Soph at the mall with Aldo already, as Fel narrates what she's suggesting her. starting with a large beauty shot of her dressed and styled as Fel suggests. The page could end with her succumbing to the temptation of playing the claw machine as Aldo goes to the bathroom, only for him to come back and see Soph emptying the machine with her MLG skillz, already with her hair down, being more herself. could have some desu stars as Aldo notices her own authentic beauty.
Kenno Arkkan
2019-02-23 00:39:59 +0000 UTCNow, how exactly will Soph look like? I'm thinking that, since Fel originally broke up with Al-kun because she thought he wasn't enough (or, put in other words, /she/ was too much for him) I'm thinking fel would take the narcissistic approach and basically suggest Soph to put her hair in a pony tail, be all girly and non-interested in otaku things, and paint her nails.
Kenno Arkkan
2019-02-23 00:36:19 +0000 UTCcopypasting last post's idea for the record: "I think Soph wouldnt be confident enough in her sex appeal to flirt like Trace and Alex, and she also wouldn't ask Al out on a date so blatantly--- so how about: Soph ask's Al to accompany her to the mall after work because she needs help carrying heavy stuff or picking out something for a male relative. Using Fel's advice, Soph could offer to treat him to his favorite food as payment. the mall would offer opportunities for Soph to come across things she's into like video games, electronics, the arcade etc. which she forces herself to ignore because she thinks they are "otaku" hobbies and would turn Al off. But she can't resist the claw machines much longer since they added a plushie/sexy statue from her favorite anime. And applying more of Fel's advice, Soph could restyle her hair and wear clothes Al is into to try to get him to notice her. But Al doesn't notice how cute she is until Soph drops the act and starts being more true to herself. " --The miz
Kenno Arkkan
2019-02-23 00:34:22 +0000 UTC
