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After-hours 24 p9 up, what's next?

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After-hours 24 p9 up, what's next?

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Yeah, I was worried that Fel would quickly take over a threesome situation and I wanted Bonnie trying things out herself. Another time though.

Mr Ru

future idea then

Hmm, i think the idea was to keep this about Bons' first guy experience. Fel already had her chance after all :o

Kenno Arkkan

would fel joining in later pages be to much?

yes perfect Kenno

Arukath Hellsaint

Sounds great. I was thinking Fel's response could be all "you go girl!" but it's might not be needed. Just a "whoa" in the peephole frame and going back to the Bonnie action. Then we can show bits of Fel watching and doing stuff in the following pages.

Mr Ru

How about next page starts with Fel crouching on the peephole from her side of the wall (gives us an excuse for a butt closeup on her yogapants) while she's like "It's coming from the bedroom... could it be?" Then a big frame of the room as fel looks through the peephole, in a similar fashion to after-hours 14th <a href="https://i.imgur.com/oJHnkob.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/oJHnkob.png</a> I wanted a mating press but that angle won't help it, so maybe it could be still missionary, with Al holding Bons by the ankles and spreading her legs apart as he pounds away. Bonnie could be holding on the sheets and leaning her head back. Next frame could be Fel planning the cake and typing on her phone, spreading the gossip with the buns. (or whatever we decide for Fel to do with the whole situation) last frame then could be the mate pressing, as exampled here <a href="https://e621.net/post/show/1384321/2017-animated-anthro-anus-anvil_position-backsack-" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://e621.net/post/show/1384321/2017-animated-anthro-anus-anvil_position-backsack-</a>

Kenno Arkkan


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