After-hours 23 p5 up, what's next?
Added 2017-07-29 03:19:25 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below!
I liked this page. I got the idea for the orange-blue contrast with the whole "keeping warm the establishment because reptiles" thing, since pet reptiles need special lights when kept indoors and one of those is blue for like, night-time, but still producing warmth, so i thought that would look pretty club-like. I really liked the result.
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Dialogue ideas: *during Monica lapdance* Green: "A cold-blood? Trust me Blackcock, if the phantom was one of ours, we'd know it." Mon: "Ask any of our patrons B. The Phantom has fur and pointed ears on top of their head." Mugger: "explains why they were staring me down harder than usual tonight" *lapdance ends* Green: "I'd put my pesoz on thoze damn cat mobsterz." *green deepthroats Mugger* Mon: "No one can agree on the species, but they do agree on one thing: anyone who sees the Phantom, sees red."
MizaruSketch
2017-07-29 11:06:32 +0000 UTC"The ass is where the similarities end...in fact, she has fur." Something like that...even if they're fucking, due to the nature of the comic it'd make sense for the dialogue to follow more like a detective show. I'm drunk, so it sounds more natural to me in that context. Something also could be "It's the talk of the club - at least among the regulars." It's probably minor, but for something like this with an entertaining story the dialogue is important IMO. Everything else sounds great - we all know Green is the queen of the deepthroat. :3
FeliciaIsMaiWaifu
2017-07-29 07:49:49 +0000 UTCMy own idea is: We already know why she's there, so i dont think it's necessary to invest frames in them chatting about it. the page starts with Monica lapdancing muggs in the champagne room (like so <a href="https://68.media.tumblr.com/37ba09e9f112ea8f491252d3d90474a5/tumblr_oe8v4meGN71up9h3do1_400.gif" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://68.media.tumblr.com/37ba09e9f112ea8f491252d3d90474a5/tumblr_oe8v4meGN71up9h3do1_400.gif</a> ) as Green says: "The phantom fucker has a nice ass?, well she ain't from this neighborhood..." next frame monica says: "In fact, she has fur. Or so our usual crowd says. Fur, and pointy ears. The phantom fucker has been the topic of gossip all week." As green deepthroats muggs like in after-hours 2. That's all the dialogue about the clues i can think off, but if there's a better or more interesting way to disclose it, im all ears :O The page would end with Muggs putting her pencil skirt back in place. "Thanks for the intel girls, you're the best." Green would say "It's always a pleasure doing "business" with you." Monica would say "We should give her a loyalty card already."
Kenno Arkkan
2017-07-29 03:49:46 +0000 UTCAight, next page should be intel-obtaining-sex. The page should finish with mon and green pointing out that the phantom fucker can't be a reptile, since, according to what they've heard between their criminal patrons, the phantom fucker has fur, and pointy ears. How we get there, it's up to us :O
Kenno Arkkan
2017-07-29 03:24:06 +0000 UTC
