After-hours 19 p7 up. what's next?
Added 2016-11-26 05:04:45 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with :D Have a great weekend fellas.
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eh i won't mind using 3-4 more pages than usual or whatever the story needs to remain cohesive and paced properly D:
Kenno Arkkan
2016-11-30 16:44:46 +0000 UTCidk why but the pose i have in my head. Fel would be standing up confidently legs spread a bit with her hands on her hips looking down at a red faced Bonnie, letting Bonnie try her hand at pleasing the tiger.
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-11-28 23:03:00 +0000 UTCI'm trying to figure out how the rest of the story will pan out within 5-6 pages (unless we make it longer). Plan is that Bonnie does a bit of exploration with Fel, gets confident with it and Fel starts doing things back, like reaching for the dildo. Then once Fel cums, it's the finale where she shows Bonnie another use for her vibrator and brings the comic to a literal climax and an ending page of Fel cleaning up and leaving a satisfied bun. It's a lot to cover.
Mr Ru
2016-11-27 10:04:51 +0000 UTCI can't think of a good position that wouldn't require Bonnie to move out of the way, so maybe for this page, it ends with Bonnie coming out of her buzz to see Fel standing naked beside the bed, looking up at her pussy. They can get into their positions in the next page.
Mr Ru
2016-11-27 08:15:01 +0000 UTCI say, as ru said before, it's time for Bonnie to put this knowledge to the test and do Fel next. Page starts with Bonnie laying flat on the bed, catching her breath. Fel could say something like "woops, my yogapants are soaking wet now" *takes em off* "Let's see if you actually paid attention, missy!, Now it's your turn"... or something. The page would end with Fel spreading in front of Bon on the bed. I'm trying to take fel back to the teacher position :p any ideas?
Kenno Arkkan
2016-11-26 05:09:45 +0000 UTC
