{ideas post} After-hours 18p10 up, what's next?
Added 2016-10-08 02:27:35 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, like the ones you're ok with :D
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i vote Alex butt nudity.
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-10-12 19:32:01 +0000 UTCYep, I can pretty much agree with all of this. All kinds of gags for the chase scene, a bit of a breaking difference for a conclusion. I might say that there needs to be some kind of adaptation on, "Let's find out who the ghost REALLY was!" and/or "And I would have gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!" But if there's not room to fit it, no need to force it.
2016-10-10 01:44:04 +0000 UTCLOL! SO chase scene going back and forth in a hallway of doors with the people involved in various states of undress. Include some nudity of Alex too, as in, Fel is tearing at her Ninja outfit as they chase her. Because we need fox tits. Woo~Ooo!
MaveriKat
2016-10-08 02:38:23 +0000 UTCI'll repost that late idea i posted in the previous post: I was thinking we should let deniz and mugger go at it on their own. Alex on the other hand, would go find Aldo and Fel, who would be done by then. Alex would try to spook them, but of course they know they're not real ghosts and they just want the treasure, so they would start chasing Alex. Alex would scream for help to her friend deni-- ehem Pirate ghost! So he would leave Mugger (after a reasonable amount of sex has happened beforehand). Of course Mugger doesn't want him to leave, so she chases deniz down. By now, Limestripes already found the treasure and are on their way to the riddle ride. Last page is the traditional chase, with limestripes leaving with the treasure.
Kenno Arkkan
2016-10-08 02:28:44 +0000 UTC
