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{ideas post} After-hours 18 begins! What's next?

Leave your ideas in the comments, like the one's you're ok with! I've set the main characters, the aesthetic and the place, what follows?

 

{ideas post} After-hours 18 begins! What's next?

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we will definitely use all these throughout the comic. and you forgot the moving eyes in the painting

Arukath Hellsaint

Why I don't have any SOLID story ideas, some classic Scooby gimmicks that could be added to it would be things like: - Mugger loses her glasses and has to paw around at the floor looking at them because she's blind without them. - A view of Green having to hold up scared Pawsy Doo, who jumped up into her arms in fear. - A close up of Green being afraid and having her hair stand on end in all different directions. - Green and Pawsy "pigging out," so to say, possibly including Pawsy Snacks or a very tall "sandwich" for Pawsy/Green. - A chase scene with "the monster," set to music, possibly with everyone dashing through doorways in a hallway with no continuity on which one they're going through. - Variations on "Zoinks!", "Jinkies!", and "I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddlin' kids!" - Al's got a plan to catch the monster, but it fails, but then it works anyway. - Running designs themed based on the original cast's runs (they always run the same way) You've already done a great job with their outfits, poses, and matching exactly where everyone sat. :>

On the style, thanks! That's the scooby i grew up with, or at least the one aired on Mexico's CN in the 90s. along with a pup named scooby doo :p I tried not to "thicken" al's back too much, Fred has a massive dorito body xD Your ideas are always so precise and objective, they really help me out ;w; Thanks mav!

Kenno Arkkan

Why am i think of Captain Caveman and the Teen Angels :p

Purgy

Not really story related but one of the things discussed on the discord was if Pawsy would have a speech impediment like Scooby. It was quickly agreed that it would be too annoying for the whole comic but maybe there could be a joke about it with the first few pages. Pawsy starts out making short responses in the scoob voice but when asked something, she starts talking a lot of illegible stuff before being told to stop eating or take a thing out of her mouth. Then she talks perfectly fine.

Mr Ru

LOL! Love that you went with a style that gives a nod to the Late 60's Era of Hannah-Barbera Animation. Completely unexpected but awesome. As for what follows... why you need a classic, "Let's split up, gang!" Green: "Oh sure. You always going off with Fel like every single other time. How about you go off with just Mugger or how about you stick around to guard me or Pawsy?" Pawsy: "Reah! Rover my rass, Rodamn it!" Al: "What was that, Pawsy Doo?" Pawsy would then take the large wad of chewing gum out of her mouth and shout, "I said you should cover my ass, Goddamn it!" before stuffing the big pile of bubble gum back into her mouth. However, Fel is insistent that Al come with her, so both teams of Fel+Al and Green+Pawsy split up... leaving poor, POOR Mugger alone. "Jinkies... no one ever wants to pair up with the raccoon..."

MaveriKat


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