After-hours #16 p10 up! What's next?
Added 2016-06-16 04:03:12 +0000 UTCleave your suggestions below! like the ones you're ok with.
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maybe as Al tries to talk about last night Susan and Alfred say something like Alfred " there is a rule in this house" Susan"what happens in the fungeon, stays in the fungeon"
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-06-16 16:34:32 +0000 UTCalso at some point i want the mom acknowledging "What happens on the fungeon, stays on the fungeon" type of deal xD
Kenno Arkkan
2016-06-16 12:46:24 +0000 UTCI like this idea... but I think as Al turns to leave with Fel, we see a domino mask peeking out of the back pants pocket of the tigress hybrid's jeans.
MaveriKat
2016-06-16 12:09:42 +0000 UTCthere should be another page left :X just a closeup/goodbye page between al and his parents.
Kenno Arkkan
2016-06-16 12:06:53 +0000 UTCAwkward End For The Win!!!
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-06-16 05:00:52 +0000 UTCKenno idea: "I say everybody stares at eachother, then the parents give a 180° turn and walk away with a frozen-in-shock face. Next morning, Everybody has breakfast like nothing happened, and there's a very awkward silence throughout the meal. By the time Al and Fel are at the door and about to leave, Al tells their parents: Also: Uh about what happened last night... want to... talk about it or... Susan: W-what happened? nothing happened last night. no fungeon cough cough... Alfred: Nothing at all. How about this? You kids are very busy starting up and everything, you could use some space, huh? Forget about us for a while, enjoy life, send us a postcard on christmas... Susan: Y-yeah! You're not a kid anymore honey, live your lives! We... we'll see eachother in new year's or something... but not here... Alfred: Yeah, far away from here... a restaurant or something... Aldo: G-got it. See you... uh... later."
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-06-16 05:00:13 +0000 UTCsuper big yes on you ideaKenno
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-06-16 05:00:08 +0000 UTCNext page, cover, or story idea?
MaveriKat
2016-06-16 04:04:54 +0000 UTC
