After-hours 14 cover discussion.
Added 2016-03-17 03:28:24 +0000 UTCPage 11 and last (the one you see above) will be finished tomorrow morning. But that shouldn't stop us from discussing what the cover is going to be.
For those new to this rodeo, simply suggest an idea of what the cover should be. Keep in mind that it has to be a landscape format. Also, if you can think of a simple enough variant I can do two versions of the cover (Like we've done in the past, where one of the covers is SFW and the other is NSFW)
Like the ideas you're ok with.
See you in the comments!
Comments
I agree with the gooey.
Angelo B.
2016-03-19 03:17:11 +0000 UTCi'd rather have people suggest lines and anything they want in specific -before- i get to do the pages x.x Now if it's a typo or a syntax type of deal go straight ahead!
Kenno Arkkan
2016-03-17 21:34:50 +0000 UTCI have some nitpicks with the finished final page. Only dialogue and highlight stuff but I feel I should ask first, so not to be rude.
Mr Ru
2016-03-17 20:52:49 +0000 UTCAnother idea is a closeup at the peephole. kinda like a PoV of bonnie. Perhaps we can see her hand on the right side of the hole as she leans on the wall. On the other side, it would be a waist-down shot of Aldo and Fel undressing or making out. I can imagine Fel unzipping Aldo's pants and Aldo pushing Fel's undies down. Nsfw could be a similar shot, waist-down, but this time it's Aldo boning Fel like, doggystyle on the bed or Fel riding him on top of the bed, or Fel blowing Al as he sits on the edge of the bed.
Kenno Arkkan
2016-03-17 17:52:59 +0000 UTCPerhaps a focus shot on Bonnie, the top hand of her head, eyes wide and ears raised... and naughty sound effects.
MaveriKat
2016-03-17 04:28:00 +0000 UTCOr it could just be beauty shots of Bonnie looking through the peephole with a lipbite and more full on toy stuff for nsfw. Kinda done all that with the comic though.
Mr Ru
2016-03-17 04:25:57 +0000 UTCWith the landscape, you could probably do both Bonnie and Fel/Al with the wall in the middle.
Mr Ru
2016-03-17 04:16:34 +0000 UTCOne idea was showing the shadow silhouettes of Fel and Al fucking on the wall where the peephole is and a focus on Bonnie's eye peeping through. Kinda sounds like the cover for a horror film though.
Mr Ru
2016-03-17 03:47:33 +0000 UTC
