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After-hours p6 up. what's next?

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After-hours p6 up. what's next?

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Like the Thought Bubble Fel from the last Bonnie AH? Don't really think it works since we can already see what she's mimicking. I think Bonnie doing Fel's positions would be enough.

Mr Ru

I'll see what i can do. Thank yoU!

Kenno Arkkan

Could be Al and Fel doing it again and Bonnie peeking through the hole and trying to mimic their position. A side by side panel to see the comparison could be really awesome with Bonnie's thoughts as she's doing it.

havik

nah man these are done just like the webcomic, on a single day. I start working next wednesday :D there's still plenty of time.

Kenno Arkkan

Don't know if Kenno's already started but if Bonnie's sticking with the vibe for this page, maybe she mixes in some rough fingering in response to seeing Fel fuck again. Probably adds to her decision to move to the dildo.

Mr Ru

I completely agree with this.

MaveriKat

As for pages after, it's overtime but I was thinking Bonnie would start slow with the dildo on the bed at first. Then she gets creative with it and we could break into a montage of her different positions through the night before the closing pages.

Mr Ru

Yeah I would agree with Mr. Ru and have her take the dildo in the bed, as Al takes Fel doggy still and jerks her off at the same time.

MaxL8

Yeah, she'd notice the action through the peephole and how they're going full thrust because Fel's not worried about being quiet anymore. Seeing the penetration makes Bonnie want to feel it herself, so it's Mr Dildo's turn.

Mr Ru

I say we start next page with a frame of Al and Fel going back at it. and the page could end with Bonnie deciding to try the dildo next, either on the bed or tucked to the wall or the coffee table in front of the tv.

Kenno Arkkan


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