After-hours 14 p4 up. Ideas for next page go here:
Added 2016-02-20 03:32:53 +0000 UTCleave em in the comments.
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Thanks!
Mr Ru
2016-02-24 16:55:18 +0000 UTCdone. nothing big but i tried ._.
Kenno Arkkan
2016-02-24 16:53:02 +0000 UTCgood ending. re-purpose Fel's Luigi death stare
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-24 03:25:43 +0000 UTCsounds good
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-23 02:32:01 +0000 UTCSpeaking of schlicks. I don't know if it's too late to add to P4 but I wondered if the panel where Bonnie's fingers go in, could use a wet sound effect. Could work together with her speech bubble below.
Mr Ru
2016-02-22 17:19:15 +0000 UTCI like this for the ending. Perhaps after bonnie is gone, Fel searches the place where her bed was and finds the outlet cover with mugger's face on it xD
Kenno Arkkan
2016-02-22 16:52:06 +0000 UTCYeah, probably leave it at the door creak point for this page, Fel checking, going back and Bonnie finding a gift box on her bed in the next. We can figure out what goes in Bonnie's 'starter kit' after that.
Mr Ru
2016-02-22 05:40:39 +0000 UTCactually thinking on it again this and Fel leaving Bonnie a toy may work. with a little back and forth with Al and Fel . Ru's sugestion shlicking panel(s) Bonnie: "this time feels better than with the Korean boyband. Al notices Fel listening for a noise and getting up "Al: what is it? Bonnie? did she her us? Fel: hold on." Bonnie sees Fel leaving the room and hides . Fel checking on Bonnie knowing whats up then leaves her the toy Fel comming back in the room Fel: it's ok she's tottally out
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-22 03:36:17 +0000 UTCOh my bad
MaxL8
2016-02-20 19:15:15 +0000 UTCWe're referring to the overall plot idea in <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/ideas-post-after-4404181">https://www.patreon.com/posts/ideas-post-after-4404181</a> Fel checks in on Bonnie, sees evidence of what she's been doing and leaves her something to help. I get what Arukath's saying but that's why I originally thought of her using an improv item to do it. A real toy would probably be hard for her to get alone, so it's up to Aunt Fel to get her started. But yeah, if Fel getting up is a turn down, we could go for Bonnie's improv toy instead. Either that or Fel addresses her through the wall and tells her to check the box under her bed.
Mr Ru
2016-02-20 19:12:56 +0000 UTCWhat? I never said anything about her getting up.
MaxL8
2016-02-20 18:37:04 +0000 UTCidk about Fel getting up it would ruin the mood. and at Bonnies age i'm sure she has toys of her own.
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-20 18:34:31 +0000 UTCI'm all for Fel continuing and teasing Bonnie with a little show
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-20 17:04:38 +0000 UTCMy plan was she does that after leaving Bonnie her present. Probably tells Al to forget about being quiet too.
Mr Ru
2016-02-20 04:16:24 +0000 UTCWell let's see...How about Fel is the only one that notices Bonnie peaking but instead let's her keep watching and keeps riding Al on a position where she can see the penetration.
MaxL8
2016-02-20 04:09:07 +0000 UTCI'd say Bonnie schlicks away for a few panels, commenting that this time feels strangely better than with her usual (Korean boyband) fantasies. But when she goes back to the peephole, she's sees that Al is alone and grabs her covers as she hears the bedroom door creak open.
Mr Ru
2016-02-20 04:06:31 +0000 UTCOh dear... I think Fel hears Bonnie... but goes on like it's, "Business as usual". Which will lead to Fel checking on the rabbit after, asking how she managed to peek in... which leads to Fel's fur standing on end much like an aggravated cat when she sees this IS Mugger's work. Cut TO Deniz's apartment where Mugger wakes up from a sound sleep in a cold sweat. "Feels like someone stepped on my grave."
MaveriKat
2016-02-20 04:00:18 +0000 UTC
