After-hours 14 begins. page 2 what's gonna be?
Added 2016-02-11 05:33:59 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, like the ones you're ok with!
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these are too good nothing to add *thumbs up*
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-02-12 00:57:51 +0000 UTCThis is absolutely perfect. I just wish I had something I could say but really, you got this next page in mind. Go to it. :3
MaveriKat
2016-02-11 12:49:34 +0000 UTCI like that they're making out first but maybe Bonnie's like a rabbit in the headlights and can't look away as she's shocked and monologuing? Thinking "I should stop" but keeps watching as she gets fidgety under the sheets. I was thinking page 3 would be a mix of Fel/Al peepshots, closeups of Bonnie as things get heated (mouth panting, nipples poking through her shirt, eye looking through the hole) and progressive shots of her hands feeling their way over her shorts as she legs spread.
Mr Ru
2016-02-11 06:06:25 +0000 UTCSo, my idea: Bonnie notices the light comes from the socket on the wall, so she pulls it out, and notices it has nothing inside, it's a peephole to the next room! (perhaps there's a small picture of Mugger with a huge grin and two thumbs up sticked to the back of the cover just for funzies) On the other room tho, the hole is in between two pieces of furniture (perhaps a dresser and a cabinet or something) so it's not very easily seen from there. Bonnie takes a peek, and surprise surprise, it's Al and Fel with just the bedside lamp on, buttnaked, trying to be "quiet" as they make out. A little conversation could be happening between the two of them, Al showing some concern. "You sure it's ok? like, she's got these HUGE ears..." and Fel be all overconfident like "It's fine! Mugger never heard us, right?" (that's what she thinks!) Bonnie would look away as soon as she realizes what's going on. maybe she even covers the socket again and blushes and just tries to sleep it off, but as the moaning begins, she get's super aroused, heavy breathing and all, and decides to take a peek again. Perhaps she thinks something like "Ok i'll just watch a liiiiiittle bit...". The page would end with bonnie looking again, and Fel is already on top of Al, as they're about to 69 :X How does that sound?
Kenno Arkkan
2016-02-11 05:50:14 +0000 UTC
