After-hours p7 up! Ideas for last page here
Added 2015-08-27 04:29:36 +0000 UTCwhat's gonna happen ?! Leave your suggestions below and like what you're ok with :>!
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I like it!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-28 03:21:06 +0000 UTCI'd suggest Mugger and Alex coming in in the morning after a fade to black, finding Bonnie stuck in her machine, ass to the viewer(and them). They say something about putting her machine to good use as they unzip, revealing boners, setting up for a possible sequel in this setting.
Garrett
2015-08-28 03:10:25 +0000 UTCArukath, to this question, suggested: "maybe if the scene blacks out, cause turning off the machine tripps the breaker. and theres a arieal view if the den with the girls saying "what happend to the power, My game!, i cant see"."
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-27 17:41:02 +0000 UTCI previously suggested: "page 8 could be just Mugger and Alex opening the garage the next morning, just to find a horrible mess all around the place. Alex would be like "What's that smell...? is it... sex and shame?" (suggested by arukath) Mugger could also say the previously suggested line of "What's with all the dildos on the floor?" and mugger would walk into a passed out bonnie with circles on her eyes and a wobbly smile. Alex could say "B-bonnie! You did it! The ultimate sex machine! wait... is that me in the hologram?? ...you mind if I give it a go?" Mugger would be all concerned, holding her forehead on her hands like "Shut up! disconnect that and give her some water. Oh god the next power bill is going to be monstruous..." IDK D: doesn't feel like a very strong punchline for the end, any ideas?"
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-27 17:40:42 +0000 UTC
