After-hours page 45 up! ideas for THE LAST SCENE!!!
Added 2014-10-29 03:50:53 +0000 UTCtype below! vote stuff up and down!
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Sounds good to me. "Hefty" seems like a good adjective. XD
Dragon tooth
2014-10-30 21:24:15 +0000 UTCYeah, that's cool too! Maybe at the end Fel and Al's daughter could tilt her head quizically asking, "Wait, wah???"
Maximum
2014-10-30 20:06:02 +0000 UTCI like that last paragraph. How about if, after all the sex happens, a narrator comes up and says "And this is where all the babies in the island come from!", and the scene cuts to Mónica the witchdoctor telling the tale of Al's adventure to a bunch of kids (with hair antennas of course) and the kids would be with troubled faces like "Im twelve and what is this".
Kenno Arkkan
2014-10-30 15:10:07 +0000 UTCI like the idea, maybe not THAT big, but slighty thicker and furious looking XD
Kenno Arkkan
2014-10-30 15:06:30 +0000 UTCI'd like to see the vial grant Al a wang bigger than or at least the same size as futaFel's so they can have "swordfights" for fun later on in their relationship. XD
Dragon tooth
2014-10-29 21:44:30 +0000 UTCThe only answer I can give to the next page is a massive orgy, with Al being the center of attention of course. That's when he will finally drink from the vial. When Al drinks that vial, not only should he have the stamina and energy of a demi-god of sexual uphoria, but his dick should permanently be a foot long as a reward for his efforts, and his potency 100% effective. Then he starts to climax inside first the Chieftain, then the Shrine maidens from before, then the ENTIRE village becoming a sex mob of carnal madness!!! Finally, in a mosaic of like scene, we get to see everyone on the floor, tables and chairs, tired out and exhausted while Al geysers out cum; exploding out of Fel in the middle of the sex pile. Then the scene ends, 18 months later, with several litters of children either being nursed or running around in play, we finally see Al at his highest moment of life; a friend to many, a hero to his new people, and a father to all. THE END!
Maximum
2014-10-29 04:53:24 +0000 UTCyes. all of this
bracabrad
2014-10-29 04:48:45 +0000 UTCI thought that maybe Soph could present Al to the chief and be like "Here he is, He did it, without cumming once." And alex would be like "W-what?? You took that seriously?? cmon, It was just a metaphore... for you to let your partner cum first you know? whoa it must have sucked to fuck so much without cumming once! hahahah!!" To what would trigger Al to drink the vial and go medieval on her ass :D
Kenno Arkkan
2014-10-29 04:44:40 +0000 UTCI see this as a precursor to my idea above.
bracabrad
2014-10-29 04:23:00 +0000 UTCIt will be an orgasm that impregnates the entire village. Also I still think crabs should be clacking their claws to the theme, "Hail the Conquering Hero" as Al comes back to the village.
MaveriKat
2014-10-29 04:00:49 +0000 UTCWe see Al and Soph arrive at the village will the vial around his neck. Ohh and ahhs to be had all around. He strides the last 10 or so feet solo to the awaiting chief with a glint is his eye. Alex starts a long winded speech which is when she breaks eye contact and when Al takes a swallow of the elixir. Starting with the Chief and working his way through the happy villagers he is basically a walking erect cum fountain screwing till sunset.
bracabrad
2014-10-29 04:00:49 +0000 UTCokey, here's my thought, next page, we begin with both fels, soph and Al at a zip line that goes from where they are down to the village. regular fel tells Al:"Ok we'll go first, the village already knows of your success, we'll announce your arrival ok?" The girls (Except futafel of course) go down first. Al says to futafel that he'll be coming back to her as soon as he can, and try to visit her as often as possible, all this in a proper corny way i guess xD) The page ends with Al landing at the village :O
Kenno Arkkan
2014-10-29 03:56:06 +0000 UTC
