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After hours page 33 up! ideas?

What should eclair give Al as a gift? =O Next page should be the transition from the dojo to the next part with the fels, that should look like a boat wreckage :O

After hours page 33 up! ideas?

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I think the pressure point thing works best with the transition. eclair and Al could make vague mentions about her gift helping Al as they leave the dojo, than make a callback to it on the page he uses it.

Mr Ru

Or both!

Mr Ru

We need crabs performing Morse Code proclaiming his victory over the Third Priestess!

MaveriKat

pressure point technique (as stated) or something to do with the G spot.

KandyCube

THEY COME FROM SPAACEEE!!

Kenno Arkkan

I was thinking like an old victorian ship with lots of details in gold and red :D Next arc i would like it to have red-pink hues.

Kenno Arkkan

Spoiler: It's a UFO wreckage. The story was sci-fi this entire time!

Mr Ru

I like the pressure point technique idea that Matthew mentioned on the last page, that would make Al more flexible (chakra alignment?).

Dragon tooth

I'd like if the ship was more colorful (a crashed trading ship with tons of fancy cargo?). All the brown of the dojo is getting tedious :P Aside from that, maybe some secret sex technique or something? I don't know.

Garrett


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