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Page 24 of after hours 3 is up! ideas go here!

next page should close this arc with mugger and open the next one. I suggest all of them sitting at a table about to dinner and talk about stuff. Also, any ideas for what should mugger give Al for his journey? And what should the next temple with the cheetah girl should look like? COMMENT SOMETHING! vOTE UP AND DOWN THINGS!!

Page 24 of after hours 3 is up! ideas go here!

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the bed doesn't have to make it in. I'm just covering all the input bases.

bracabrad

not sure about the bed guys, it's going to be a single page from them having dinner before bed, and them arriving at the next shrine :O i'm not sure i'll be able to squeeze that in.

Kenno Arkkan

i disagree with the first paragraph, we still have a lot of ground to cover (half at least) and we're on page 23 already xD So i would skip long backstory explanations for the comic's sake. If the comic ends too big, its going to be too expensive to market it properly. Now the second paragraph tho, i'm 200% Ok with it. Sold. Wrap it up and send it to me xD it's going to demand some research, but it shall be worth it. Like, she's a P.E. specialist or something =O what do you guys think?

Kenno Arkkan

yeah patron fucked up the emailing and whatnot :o hopefully it's back on track now.

Kenno Arkkan

Sold.

Kenno Arkkan

I support this idea as it's super close to mine!

MasterShake

Wow, I just got this message 13 hrs late. I was just joking about Mugger really showing up, but the lifewater sounded like a good idea.

MasterShake

I'd say Mugger should discuss the children she had birthed and gave to the village, and how she secretly misses them all, maternal instincts and all. Al should receive her breast milk in a water sack, but it'd be altered alchemically to allow him more vigor... And virility ;) As for the Ceetah's temple and home, it should be more Zen and meditation like, with a tone of hunting fetishes. Here, Al can learn poses, positions, and even pressure points and massage techniques from the priestess here to better pleasure her and any he mingles with.

Maximum

welcome back to the net! Yes, yes, and yes. High quality H2O would be pretty fitting. <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ly1c22SMKow" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ly1c22SMKow</a> I like the idea of a jumbo gel bed. Maybe some sort of cave plant? Something between a mushroom and a jellyfish? True story - I was one phone call away from being named "Harry" when I was about to be born.

Dragon tooth

On a non related note My internet is back up after a storm apparently blew up some hub on my ISP network. Now Down to business. I'm with Mr. Potter (really your name begs for that) on the name, and the sets of three's theme. Mugger should give Al a pouch of glowing ever cold water (like from Water Boy) that when drank cools the urge to purge his load and gives him a burst of life. Like a Zen boner finishing move or something. Mugger should pop in like a zen adviser in a tiny bubble to remind him of the water. also that banana to eat because why not. Al definitely deserves a meal so he can recharge. They should stay the night in like a gel bed or something . Mystical life water temple has to have something like a water bed right?

bracabrad

I'd call her Lightning Commander or "The Commander" for short.

MaveriKat

hmm, maybe Mugger could give Al some fruit or food with aphrodisiac qualities. Perhaps something that cheetah gal really likes.

Dragon tooth

guys this is happening tomorrow =O there's been little feedback cmon :X

Kenno Arkkan

totally agree xD even zoro hahahaha

Kenno Arkkan

y-right she doesn't have a name =o ! I like it! anybody else? :&gt;!

Kenno Arkkan

XD Im not sure about mugger showing up, but the rest sounds cool!

Kenno Arkkan

Oh, and if she doesn't have a name yet, might I suggest "Éclair"? Aside from being a tasty pastry, in french Éclair means "flash of lightning". Apparently named because the desert can be eaten quickly (in a flash).

Dragon tooth

I'm thinking something like a sparring dojo. And since we're going for troilism (threesome fetish), I'd say lots of things in 3’s. Training dummies in suggestive poses, swords, triangular designs, picture of Zoro (from One Piece xD), candle stands with with 3 candles on each, etc.

Dragon tooth

Hmmm, I'm thinking some sort of Water to rejuvenate him. Have the Cheetah gal be super rough and dom. The prelude to his biggest challenge has really gotta test him. So just when things look bleak and he's about to cum Mugger appears like Kitana from MK1 and is all like "Use the element which brings life" :P

MasterShake


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