p7 of after hours 3 up! Suggestions and ideas
Added 2014-06-18 17:30:52 +0000 UTCyup yup its another page. I slowpoked really hard yesterday, sorry for that delay :p Hum, so i guess next page is at night, on the festival, having al about to be executed, maybe soph feeling a little guilty and sad, when suddenly the witch doctor mónica comes in and points out that Al is sort of special for some weird reason and he must overcome the trial of the volcano! D:! People on the hangouts mentioned this idea of the rainbow cum just for the lulz. But we could implement it later on =O I was thinking that maybe when he went up the volcano and defeated 3 of the 4 priestesses, the fourth would be fel, but maybe... she would have a secret futa twin (maybe recluded because she was born that way and didn't want to take charge of the tribe) O.o! ANd oh surprise, she came rainbow color and tasted like sweet coconut syrup!! =O Al would request to know her secret so he could "Prove his worth later on". Maybe Fel and her twin have a secret garden with this mysterious indigenous fruit that happens to give that effect on cum for no particular reason! Anyways! Leave ideas n stuff! Have a nice day!
Comments
Oooh! That's good
Dragon tooth
2014-06-19 23:33:01 +0000 UTChow about during the rights of execution, "The Codex Futa" flips to an old prophesy, a silhouette with an "AL antenna". Monica takes notice of the resemblance sparing Al for the moment.
Arukath Hellsaint
2014-06-19 22:42:51 +0000 UTCobviously this could only lead to the island's first "Adult" Snowcone Stand
Dragon tooth
2014-06-19 20:25:15 +0000 UTC"Oh fuck is that blood!" *hybrid gal licks* "MMMMMM! Strawberry."
Dragon tooth
2014-06-19 20:23:53 +0000 UTCI imagine suddenly having red cum would be a serious concern!
Garrett
2014-06-19 18:56:25 +0000 UTCAntenna suggestion seems pretty good yeah
Garrett
2014-06-19 18:46:17 +0000 UTCWhat if Al's cum got new colors and flavors for each hybrid he fucked on the island? Like maybe that could be an unforeseen after-effect of something that Monica does. Unlocks his true potential?
Dragon tooth
2014-06-19 02:58:48 +0000 UTCI like the antenna suggestion :p sounds goofy
Kenno Arkkan
2014-06-18 21:51:02 +0000 UTCi do like this idea how about the reason why he must go fight the elite 4 is cause in the prophecy by their predecessors that one day the hybrid people would be in dire need and a man with the antennae will appear one day and lead the way to years of prosperity and expansion. Also i like the fact about the futa twin not wanting to carry that burden of being chief, for the reasoning on why her dick is rainbow colored and flavored is that she discovered the long forgotten fruits of their tribe that gives anyone who consumes it flavored seamen.
AzuraDio
2014-06-18 19:12:21 +0000 UTCOkay. Sorry, just really dug the idea of Two Fels.
MaveriKat
2014-06-18 18:00:52 +0000 UTCwhoa that's taking it to another whole new level XD take it easy! The focus should remain on Al and his journey to keep this story somewhat logical. But hey, sex fruits, good idea :O we can use it for other stuff!
Kenno Arkkan
2014-06-18 17:55:51 +0000 UTCcatgirls with dicks man, what's not ridiculous about it already XD
Kenno Arkkan
2014-06-18 17:43:59 +0000 UTCTwo Fels!? TWO FELS!?!? That idea is pure and utter win! Go for it, good sir. I can see it now... the special sacred plan known as THE ECSTAREE!!! Mentioned in the Hentainomicon of Witch Doctor Monica, but has never been found by anyone, (Except the Fel sisters). The text regarding its location was garbled, and depending on how one read it, it could be saying that the Ecstatree is found growing on a mountain, in a deep forest, at an oasis in a desert, or at the bottom of the ocean! With legends that supposedly, the Ecstatree could grow two kinds of fruit: a blue phallic-shaped fruit, and a pink mammary-shaped fruit. Anyone who ate a fruit matching their sex would have their body becomes its idealized image – blemishes and scars would be removed, proportions perfected, organs enlarged, hair cut to the proper length, and most of all, give yummy rainbow cum! Truly, it would be Miracle Fruit...
MaveriKat
2014-06-18 17:41:59 +0000 UTCFor next page in particular? Would love to see some more soph ass if she's being written out, or perhaps she volunteers to accompany Al? Alex casually fucking everyone as they do their festival stuff would be a good scene as well. No opinion on the rainbow cum thing, but sounds pretty ridiculous to me, though I guess that doesn't mean much in context.
Garrett
2014-06-18 17:38:09 +0000 UTC
