The last chapter (181) was just rewritten.
Added 2023-09-25 02:26:23 +0000 UTCThe last chapter (181) was just rewritten. I felt like it was rushed and at least to me it seems better now, things changed a bit so tell me what ya think. Otherwise chapters will continue as usual tomorrow :) The starting point of the rewrite starts at: "We have a battlefield to explore.”"
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I agree with this. Is riptide powerful enough to go against the blood moon kingdom in the greater multiverse?
justin
2023-09-25 03:54:51 +0000 UTCRiven is like a Navy SEAL though... He is the scout
Scion
2023-09-25 03:47:01 +0000 UTCThe new one is better, but can you expand on why riven was not doing diplomacy with the vampires? If he would to introduce himself as a baren of his faction they may have been able to have some type of diplomacy there...
Scion
2023-09-25 03:45:51 +0000 UTCI don't think you use the military as it would act in this situation. This almost star trek level of captain on away missions without support from the crew. Where is the Intel and sit rep. Where is the usage of other assets
justin
2023-09-25 03:41:49 +0000 UTC
