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Miguel Gomes
Miguel Gomes

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1st Patreon Feedback Request

Hello everyone, the story has seen explosive growth over the last few days, and we've finally reached the 10 Patron benchmark! This milestone means we have a community large enough now to start discussing things that can meaningfully shape both the story and the Patreon.

Firstly, I wanted to thank you to all the new members who've enjoyed the story enough to lend your support :), and to everyone who has been commenting on recent chapters! I enjoy reading all of them and want to build an interactive community here in Fallen Eagle.

We've reached a significant point with the conclusion of Volume 1 and the beginning of Volume 2. While I'm personally satisfied with how the first book wrapped up, this feels like the right moment to check in with you, the readers, about the start of this new arc.

Do you feel the story tapering off? Are you finding the new characters interesting? It's early days, but are you enjoying the direction the story is headed? What additions would you like to see to the Patreon page?

I don't want to be an author disconnected from his readers. I started writing this story with just one reader in mind - myself - but the story has grown to encompass a bigger community, each with their own thoughts and ideas.

The only thing I ask is to keep the feedback respectful.

Thank you for your time,

Theodorus Sideris

1st Patreon Feedback Request

Comments

overall I just like whatever you are doing with the various characters I can see a goal for each of them and it pleases me to see a story where each player is a rich individual Please make Stephanos grow into his newfound job and into an asset And all the army building is great !

Mathieu

more army and town building pls

Ollie Fairweather

I really like the story so far. One thing I would note is that there were times I noted minor but clear historical inaccuracies (for example mention of potatoes when the story is set before the discovery of the new world). Overall though, they don't really detract from the plot much. One thing I will add on to a previous comment would be that I'm hoping to see Theo get back to building and organizing, as opposed to intrigue.

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