Criticism at last!
Added 2022-02-02 15:51:00 +0000 UTCApologies for posting this a day late, anxiety, work and life has been strangling me in different ways. (I love my job, don't worry, it's just it is a minimum 10hr shift, sometimes longer depending)
So I finally have a small group of college people pull me aside and do a whole break down of chapter one of my novel. Awesome! Now I know what other parts to strengthen and clarify. This does mean that the manga is also going to be redone to some extent and have a few major changes. For discloseur, I do have effectively the rough draft of chapter 1 and ill continue to post it as a taste for what is to come.
Now for the second part of this, I know I still have to properly write Milly and Lilith's profile, again it's hard to do so when anxiety is clouding my mind. So this poll will simply be for who ever is next.
Thank you so much for your support, patience and most of all, simply enjoying my world and my imagination as it's built and reforged to be even better.
