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Another Sunday, another page. Merry Christmas everyone!
At this point there may be some pages that may needed editing and re-uploading because, at this point I'm noticing some mistakes that I've been missing. This is my first time trying to manage such a major scale project (or at least it FEELS major scale to me.) So I just wanna be transparent and say yeah, there's probably gonna be some problems here and there. I mean for example, this page here. I only just noticed upon posting this that, there is no gesture or prompt for the craftsmen to speak up! Ill just edit the posts when the corrections are made just so that the flow or the story isn't interrupted too badly.
Also, the Beta copy of the novel should be ready by Christmas. On new years I intend to do a kind of mini beta sale, anyone who purchases 10$ for the month of January will get a PDF copy of the beta version of my story. This does come with homework though, because I need to know what you all think of it. Is there stuff that doesn't make sense? Things that need to be cleared up? What do you think of the characters and the flow of the story? No major editor stuff, but just inflections on the story over all. I need your guy's help to make it as best as I possibly can, as a bonus you all get to keep the original draft copy.
