Making "AlBot" Pt. 2 - Animatic
Added 2023-09-02 15:04:31 +0000 UTCBecause I don't have a sci-fi space lab or giant robot at my disposal, there'll be a lot of greenscreen in this production. To help plan out the shots I decided to preview the entire sketch as a rough hand-drawn animatic.
First I recorded the lines in Pro Tools and edited everything to exactly 1 minute. I was recovering from an illness so my voice sounds rough and snotty (sorry!) but it gets the point across. I also threw in some sound fx & music to help create a vibe and guide the visuals.

Importing that as a single mixed audio clip into Blender, I set up a Storypencil project. Storypencil is a free addon that lets you organize and manage a whole edit of Grease Pencil scenes in one file (Grease Pencil is a toolset in Blender for drawing & 2D animation). It's extremely handy.

After marking where all the cuts of my imaginary shots will be, I got into sketching and crudely animating each shot to the soundtrack, until I had some lazy version of all of them.
It's really hard to compose for vertical framing! Feels like a bunch of compromises. But I can't tell if that's objectively true or just my personal bias due to a lifetime of watching and working with horizontal aspect ratios... Is a future gen-alpha Spielberg going to think CinemaScope looks like trash?

You can see in the final video above, I started out doing very sloppy stick figures, then gradually slipped into doodling more details. I should've kept myself more in-check with that! Would've finished faster.
But now that I watch it... I think it works as a short. Let's commit to this. It shall henceforth be our bible.
Now to figure out how to actually shoot it. "Preproduction" is next!
Comments
Awesome!
Anapan
2023-09-03 07:01:57 +0000 UTCI lol'd many times. Can't wait to see it fully realized
sam ballard
2023-09-02 20:11:44 +0000 UTCThe animatic is fantastic! However (perhaps its just me) the "Al" should have an initial function that captain disillusion expects it to do (like giving him a massage because alan gives him free massages all the time, since its supposed to "replace" some functions of alan).
BurritoGaming
2023-09-02 17:21:15 +0000 UTCYour animatic is really good! ...are you sure you don't want to release it as is? You did technically make it in Blender.
PeteyPak
2023-09-02 17:10:42 +0000 UTCIt amused me how much Al (Alan) and AI (Artificial Intelligence) look alike. When I read an article about AI, I like to mentally replace it with Al.
Brandon Dilbeck
2023-09-02 16:49:47 +0000 UTCme like.
Daniel Kohl
2023-09-02 15:41:02 +0000 UTCEven just sketched out, this is already hilarious and a great short.
Joe Greathead
2023-09-02 15:12:01 +0000 UTC