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Naga Break (Draft)

There's tftg (male to herm), domination/submission, and exhibitionism in this story. There's male on herm and herm on herm action as well.

Here's a very polished draft of a story I wrote a couple years ago. It's another story set in "The Tishen Transformation" universe. It's got a kink I have rarely written: Domination/Submission. I'll be doing more with it in the future, but this story has a bit of it and it's a nice tangent from my other works.


A gryphon propositions the Naga receptionist at his complex and has his life irrevocably changed because there's more to her than anyone would have guessed.

Naga Break

By: Zmeydros (Lucien Quinn)

I've always had a thing for nagas. A few days ago, I saw the naga receptionist that work follow a short furred dragon upstairs. The way she was looking at him gave me the idea that she wanted something more than just a short chat. It was the first time that I saw every inch of her long sensuous tail.

No matter what I try, I can't get that scene out of my head. I imagine her going up to that lucky dragon's room, taking her clothes off, and coiling around him and... now I'm hard. Hard again! What was a male gryphon supposed to do? Crap! I can't even walk to my room straight. My ribbed avian cock has found it's way down my left pant leg.

I was proud of my cock, but this was just frustrating. I opened my door while holding my left foot off of the floor. Whenever I set my foot down, my junk got bent at an odd angle. The moment I was on the other side of the door, I pulled off my pants and stared at my throbbing maleness. It had rings around it near the middle and near the end that looked like ribbing and on the sides there were a couple bulges that the ladies seemed to love. I used to have this straight tapered cock, but I got some enhancements from a Tishen Transformation booth.

Life's been better ever since! I got way more sensation out of this thing now. Stroking it felt so good. I moaned and laid my back against the door thinking about that naga. Her cyan-blue scales, her hood, her bouncy breasts, and that long sexy tail. How I wished I could be wrapped up in that thing!

I didn't know why it made me so horny. I stroked and stroked, but before I allowed myself to cum, I pulled my hand away. How many times had I masturbated about this? Six? Seven times? Wouldn't it be so much better if I could get the real thing? She didn't seem like the prude type and I was now living in Tishen City, a place where people can just walk up to each other and ask for sex. I'd never tested that myself. I got my roomiest pair of jeans and went downstairs to the front desk.

She was there looking at some website with lots of random colors on the computer. She seemed bored, maybe my proposition would be a good distraction? I went through all sorts of ways to ask her.

She cleared her throat. "How can I help you?"

"Wanna have sex?" I blurted out and then covered my mouth. That's not the way I wanted to ask! Stupid, stupid, stupid!

She chuckled as I felt something move up my pant leg. The end of her tail pressed at my bulge as she said. "I get off in twenty minutes, care to have a seat behind the desk while I finish my shift?"

"S-sure." I said looking at her mischievous grin. What did that mean? Her eyes were a bit narrow, like she wanted to chase me down and tackle me. Was I her prey or something?

"Sit in the chair and turn away from me facing the wall." She said calmly while poking harder at my prick.

I stifled a moan when she applied pressure to my cock tip and then sat in the chair and did as she asked. Someone came in the door and she helped them figure out how to pay their first month's association fee. While she did this, the end of her tail stroked my cock through my pants.

The moment the guest was gone, she said, "Pull your pants down."

I tried to turn around to look at her so I could talk about this request, but she just held the back of the chair and said, "I promise you'll like it."

Well, public indecency wasn't something that was even illegal here, which left me unable to come up with much else to protest, so, I stood up and pulled my pants down letting my cock bounce freely in the cool air. It was even harder now that it was free of my pants. When I sat back down, I was careful to not sit on my tailfeathers. The moment I was seated, she said, "Good bird!" and coiled her tail around my cock.

When she started squeezing rhythmically, I groaned in pleasure and thrust into her tail's grasp. Her tail was cool to the touch and that only made me more excited. I heard her say something while I was grunting and thrusting my hips, "What did you say?"

"Do you like surprises?"

"I love surprises." I said when she stopped squeezing my rod and listened for a response.

She gave me a vial of something and said, "Drink up."

"What is this?" I tried to look at her, but the large back of the chair was in the way.

"It's the surprise. No worries, it's not harmful, it's fun, I promise." 

The stuff in the vial was sweet, a bit like grenadine. I drank it all and waited as she started playing with my cock again. "I'm getting close!"

"You can't cum till my shift is over." She stroked me hard and fast and when I started to cum, she squeezed the base of my penis so hard that nothing came out.

"AAAH!" I cried as she denied my orgasm. I was so hard. So ready! I was blushing really deeply as I realized that her taking control like this was only making me hotter.

"That was close, you impatient bird." She checked the time. "Only eight minutes left, I know you can make it." 

Someone came to the front desk and she turned the chair to the side exposing me. "Ao, I caught a bird today."

Now I knew the name of the dragon that I saw this naga with the other day. Ao was a short white-furred dragon with some opalescent feathers on his head and shoulders and possibly elsewhere, but I couldn't see because he was on the other side of the counter. As he looked at me, his black horns gleamed and the feathers on his head fluffed up. "Oh! Such an attractive bird! You're so lucky, Soniiss."

So that was her name! Soniiss's tail was around my cock idly stroking me in front of him. I couldn't stop all my moans. My cheeks and crotch got warmer as Ao watched me. He seemed a bit shy, like he was trying to look at me, but from an angle where it wasn't as obvious. After he was done speaking, Soniiss leaned in and whispered something in his ear. 

He squeaked in surprise as his feathers shot straight up before he said, "Oooh, now I'm wishing I didn't have to get ready for my date with Ian."

"Shoo!" Soniiss pawed at him playfully. "You'll get your fun soon enough. And do invite me to spend time with you and Ian again."

"Will do!" Ao said as he dashed off toward the elevator.

During their exchange, I started feeling odd, as if the area behind my balls was being tickled roughly by someone's fingertips. At first, it made me shift my hips, but then it got me to squawk in surprise. The tickling had become a deep tissue massage and there was this intense pulsing, like I had a second heart in my crotch.

It was so distracting that I wasn't even having to hold back my orgasm. My erection even faltered a bit. I looked up at Soniiss. "What is happening?"

"You said you liked surprises." The tip of her tail poked its way down under my balls and pressed against what should have been my taint.

I squawked in surprise--her tail tip had found a valley in my flesh, a valley that was growing! I hissed at the unfamiliar feeling only to groan as I got this need to rub against her tail tip. A bright spark of pleasure sent pre dripping from my quickly-re-hardening shaft. A little spot just under my balls was sending sharp stabs of pleasure through me. My cheeks burned each time she rubbed that spot particularly hard.

Was I sweating? It felt wet down there! And I could feel her scales against something other than my fur. In fact, it felt like there was a recess that was my own flesh but wasn't fur. I moaned suddenly as I felt that pulse in my crotch go through the roof and a pulling sensation under my balls. Her tail entered me as a space for it formed and I couldn't stop making noises.

She just stood there, on the part of her tail that wasn't busy fondling and prodding me, humming as if nothing was happening. I rolled my hips and made a cacophony of calls as she tested what I had become sure was my new pussy. I was getting more and more pleasure from it, but she was not escalating it enough that I could reach orgasm with either my pussy or my throbbing pole. "Please let me cum!" I looked at her begging, but she didn't even turn around.

I reached down with my hands and put one on the coil that was around my cock and found my clit with the fingers of my other hand. The moment I tried to put my hands to serious use, she turned around and grabbed my arms. "Bad bird!"

I pulled my hands away and whimpered. "Isn't your shift over yet?"

"It ended a few minutes ago. I tweeted about what I was doing to you and got some fun responses including many suggestions that I show you my surprise."

"Wait..." I looked at her as she stared down at me with a grin that made me feel very small. I blushed heavily. It was the perfect look to make me even more wet. "You have a surprise?"

"Why yes I do." She took off her dark maroon top revealing a lacy white bra. I watched her breasts bounce free as she pulled off her bra.

"Right here?" I looked out the giant storefront windows. It was like we were providing a live sex show for whoever walked the street outside.

"Right here." She said as she took off her "pants" which were more like a pin-striped black loin cloth. Her long beautiful sex was puffy along its entire length.

She worked on pulling off my shirt as I said, "Wow! Is that amazing slit your surprise?"

"Nope." She pulled the rest of my clothing off the same way I'd strip a bed--just grabbed and pulled as many layers off at once as she could. When I was naked, she pushed my face into her sex saying, "Put that beak to work."

I didn't know where to start. I could feel the heat pouring off of her sex, I could smell her scent clearly--even with my somewhat muted sense of smell. My beak was now pushing those luscious lips apart. I started to lick and move my beak a bit exploring. I felt small being faced with such a big pussy to pleasure. I wanted to find the best places to stimulate. She wiggled her tail in my sex making me moan as I licked.

When I found her clit, she moaned and ground her sex into my face. When I pressed my tongue as deep as it would go inside her, her muscles squeezed my tongue. I soon found another spot that pleasured her about as far as I could reach with my tongue and on the upper side. It was slightly rougher than the surrounding flesh. When I went back to her clit, I found that there was another clit above it.

I got a burst of fluid and a groan from her when I licked at it. It was not like her fem juices, it was thicker and muskier. As I was wondering if that tasty stuff had come from this upper clit, it started pushing into my mouth. My eyes went wide as inch after inch of curved throbbing flesh entered my mouth. She had a cock! I pulled my beak off of her... hir? to beg for her to use it on me. My poor pussy was dripping near constantly now and I was starting to fantasize about my first ride on a cock.

"Surprise!" Shi yelled and grabbed my head shoving hir cock back in my mouth.

I bobbed my head on hir tool hoping desperately that she would use it on my new pussy and finally let me cum--my talons were burning from all the teasing. The longer this lobed tool got, the more I wanted it inside me. I couldn't suck it all at this point and had to use my hand for the lower part. I moaned as shi gave me another blast of pre. I swallowed it as shi pulled my head away. There were two people in the lobby now. One female human and one male Siberian tiger. I blushed as I glanced at them. The tiger had an erection clearly visible in his tight jogging shorts.

"Does this bird want to be stuffed?" Shi made me moan by moving hir tail across my clit as shi pulled it out of me.

"YES!" 

I tried to stand up, but shi put hir hands on my shoulders and said, "Stay down! I'm going to show you what it's like to get naga lovings."

Shi coiled around me starting by using the end of hir tail to secure my legs together. As shi worked hir way up, shi actually made it so my legs were bent leaving pussy completely unprotected. The gap shi left in hir coil to expose my sex made me feel like there was a constant draft on my back end. The temperature difference made me squirm. I gasped as shi wound around my hips letting my cock escape through a gap in the coil. Then, shi coiled around my arms and part of my torso. I could feel hir body pulsing and twitching around me. It was like the most intimate hug I'd ever had. 

Shi turned me so that my front was facing our audience and pressed hir cock against my entrance. I squawked and the two that were watching me grinned--I knew they were looking forward to hearing me make a lot more noises and that made my heart pound even harder.

“I like all my birds stuffed.” Shi said as shi pressed the head of hir prick inside.

I started groaning at hir joke, but the sudden entrance of hir cock made me moan instead. My new pussy complained the moment shi got hir pointy head in. I squeaked in pain and shi slowed down. Shi wiggled hir hips teasing the part of my pussy that shi had filled and I started to relax. Hir cock felt slicker now. I didn't think it was possible, but I was even wetter than before.

Soon, I was moaning quite a bit and shi said, "Sounds like you want more."

"Please!" My heart was beating so hard and fast I could hear a rushing in my ears. A new tender part of me had a cock lodged in it and was giving me these amazing sensations. I could only imagine what it would be like to have hir further inside.

I took a deep breath as shi started entering me again. "HOOOH!" I breathed out as shi pulled me onto hir member with hir coils. I could feel hir muscles contract in an organized fashion around me bending my legs a bit more to give hir an even better angle. I squirmed as shi hit my hymen.

"Gotta break your new equipment in. Yell!"

"What?" I tried to turn to look at hir."

Shi shifted so shi could look at me with hir predatory eyes. "Yell or squawk as loud as you can. It will hurt less that way."

"Really?" I couldn't imagine how that would help, but I did want to get hir all the way in.

"Just do it!" Shi gave me a squeeze. "What do you have to lose? Your dignity? You're here in the lobby with an audience."

"My virginity." My quip got laughter from hir and those that were watching. Now there were four. I blushed really deeply as I realized that I was probably going to orgasm in front of them not too long from now.

"Ready?" Shi pulled hir cock out a bit.

"Yeah." I nodded.

"Louder!"

I started to yell my reply. "YEEAAAAAAAAAAHHH-OOOOWWW!" My yell turned into a screech as shi eased that cock past my hymen. The insides of my legs and my toes burned and for a moment it felt like there just wasn't enough room for hir in there but shi kissed and stroked my head and did hir best to calm me and I started to feel better.

To get my pussy better prepared for hir size, shi made little thrusts just at the edge of what I could take going deeper each time I opened up for hir. This was going on while another person started watching me. When I was moaning again, Soniiss pressed hirself in the rest of the way and I thrashed in hir encumbering embrace. "FUCK!" 

A gazelle herm stepped into view and started pulling off hir clothes. Hir breasts were small, but hir cock gave the one in me a run for it's money and shi had these beautiful muscles. I watched hir stroke and finger hirself as Soniss started pounding me. I gasped, squeaked, and squealed. I was held so tight that Soniiss could thrust with all hir might and not move me much at all. I was surprised I could take it this hard and that I liked that I could take it this hard!

Soniiss bent around in a feat of unbelievable flexibility and started sucking on my shaft. More of my audience stripped for me. A lionness was sucking on the gazelle's throbbing pole. I would have been jealous, but I was too busy trying not to cum. My pussy was going ballistic! My throat hurt from how loud I was moaning and crying out.

The gazelle got up next to me and the lioness sucked on that shaft so close that I could marvel at the way the gazelle's shaft was glistening from the job the lioness was doing on it. Soniiss pulled hir mouth off of my pussy and made a great hiss as hir cock started pulsing along its length. I came thinking about what was about to happen. My pussy got extremely wet extremely quickly and I blushed thinking about what a mess I was making only to cry out in triumphant whooping calls when Soniiss bit my neck and emptied hirself inside me.

My body trembled, my cheeks got hot, the base of my tail tingled--some place deep inside me felt warm in a way I'd never felt warm before. As I was coming down from orgasm, Soniiss was still cumming inside me and the gazelle looked like shi was really close. My moaning was interrupted by the gazelle pulling the lioness off hir cock and cumming all over my face. I choked on some of hir cum when shi shot it right down my throat.

I was too much in bliss to care and I was soon gasping and moaning as if nothing had happened. Though, I couldn't breath through my nares because they were covered in a thick layer of gazelle cum. The lioness licked the cum off of my face and then suddenly went down to my still-throbbing member.

When she ran her raspy tongue over my cock, my whole body shook. It was almost too much stimulation! She didn't have to bob her head more than five times before I came squawking and screeching in orgasm. Soniiss laughed at me as I made a mess in that lioness's mouth. Shi was still buried inside me and holding me tight. I felt very comfy the moment I came down from my peak and was greeted with the lioness's mouth which had my cum and the gazelle's cum in it. I kissed back enjoying the situation than the taste.

She was a great kisser and I lost track of where our tongues were as I fell into a very warm afterglow. After we broke the kiss. Soniiss leaned down and whispered in my ear. "I've alwayssss wanted a pet bird."


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