Heidi_C01P06
Added 2025-02-27 15:04:09 +0000 UTC
Comments
The Heidi story really is a slow burn when you have to lay out all the exposition panel by panel. Hope the uninitiated know it's totally worth it.
Soja
2025-02-27 21:45:32 +0000 UTCLove the build up so far, I have no idea if what you have planned for the future story wise. And if you take suggestions, but I feel like your story telling fits this story. Its called "Sway of suggestion" the pacing is perfect and like I said, it fits your writing style character building wise! Anyway, keep it up as always!
JustChris
2025-02-27 18:56:51 +0000 UTC
