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MTO_C06P05

MTO_C06P05

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Not any in particular really, but with each release you could have one panel that shows the text and then another That’s just plane so that everything’s visible maybe?

Jimbo

Love seeing Mandy so round at this point. Also love how she's a bottom heavy contrast to Scars top heaviness. Curious what you mean in the first panel where you have a double word "many many". Also a small critique that might pay off in the next episode, but the last panel out of context seems quite skimpy compared to your normally succinct but satisfying dialog boxes. My only guess is she shocked by Scars size/body, but in context she seems put off about her donut comment.

Mr. Monopoly

Sure! Any particular ones you have in mind?

Themagmaman

It’s not really something that matters with this panel, but would you ever consider making a page without any of the text on so we can see the models fully? Sometimes a text bubble can block some good stuff. Great page again btw. Love how blubbery her thighs look especially with how fit she was not long ago!

Jimbo

Oh man I can't wait to see Scarlett! Love that Mandy enjoys fat women, I'm real tired of the "I hate this person so I'm gonna spent alot of time with them acting as their friend while fattening them" it makes no sense and has been done to death, this is really refreshing! Keep it up!

JustChris

Oh,She likes big girls. All Is Forgiven then. Who hasn't been there, summoning ancient creatures to fatten up a crush. Understandable.

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