I agree. I think it would be interesting if someone tried to plot her weight over time, almost like seeing a chart or something. Also her mom seems like she lost a little weight, I'd be curious to know if she did
Micheal B J
2020-09-07 00:54:43 +0000 UTC
Your story is developing at a nice pace, and noting the months flying by works well.
Beautiful illustrations as always, Amanda’s face has a nice well-fed consistency, the chubbiness charmingly cute and projects an image of young woman who isn’t all that pretentious or materialistic.
The third panel is especially well-done, Amanda’s dense belly fat propelling outward is quite sensual.
Kudos!