WidowmakerReaper02 - WiP16
Added 2017-08-06 21:10:35 +0000 UTCHey!
First half is almost ready to be polished. Second half is still a bit too rough.
The whole thing feels a little stiff. I wonder if that'll go away with time or if I need to try and fix it now. Oh well ... :X
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no, i took a break from this to work on other things. this will be the next animation i finish.
2017-11-16 13:49:27 +0000 UTCdid this get finished?
gackt
2017-11-16 05:47:54 +0000 UTCa full video? like a couple of minutes long and stuff?
2017-08-23 14:56:01 +0000 UTCplease make this into a full vid with sound (^^)
2017-08-23 03:19:46 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the detailed response! Gave me a few ideas =)
2017-08-13 15:17:26 +0000 UTCLooking great! For your stiffness, you could try adding some more overlap on her head/chest/hip rotations when Reaper thrusts, (originating from his hips then offsets), then separate her moving back and the camera re-adjusting just before he pulls out so you can read them better each, and re-check that the camera follows his body/head when he pulls back (it gets disconnected a bit). Then you just need to fill the bit where she recovers (you probably have ideas, could make her a bit out of breath to get some free noise motion), and the last quarter looks nice already. Keep it up! PS: eh just realised this version was from a week ago, anyway looking forward to the next post
2017-08-13 11:55:51 +0000 UTCThanks, I always appreciate suggestions, so do keep them coming :p
2017-08-07 13:52:41 +0000 UTCYah, I know. That's part of the second half, which is still very rough.
2017-08-07 13:52:01 +0000 UTCThe pause after he thrusts adds time for something yeah, personally I think a smile would be better then a lip bite. She could lick her lips too, I dont know. I guess this is more relevant when it's time to do the face and polish. As for stiffness, would more chest/torso movement add some flow?, leaning to the side a little bit for a breif time. Maybe its stupid suggestions, but I thought why not throw in my two cents ^_^
2017-08-06 22:37:52 +0000 UTCIt looks amazing. But I think it's missing something after he came inside of her mouth. Maybe a little wink or a lip bite or tasting his cum with the tongue. Something.
Kubus-Sc7
2017-08-06 21:23:28 +0000 UTC
